Template:Did you know nominations/Arthur Lyttelton

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 02:20, 17 March 2012 (UTC)

Arthur Lyttelton

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• ... that prior to becoming the Bishop of Southampton, Arthur Lyttelton was the first Master of Selwyn College, Cambridge?

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Created/expanded by Harrias (talk). Self nom at 12:48, 11 March 2012 (UTC)

• Hook: I think something about playing cricket before being a bishop would be better, but the original is okay. Referenced.

Article: New enough, long enough. Referencing is thorough and well-formatted. Paraphrasing checks: 1 has issues, 2 is clean, and 3 is clean.

Summary: Bit of close paraphrasing to be dealt with. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:48, 16 March 2012 (UTC)

• How is it now? I've disregarded the 14 word case, as that is an attributed quote, and I can't come up with another way of phrasing "members of the church of england"? Harrias ^talk 16:41, 16 March 2012 (UTC)

• Good to go! Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:12, 16 March 2012 (UTC)