Template:Did you know nominations/Chris Lazari

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 00:37, 1 April 2015 (UTC)

Chris Lazari

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... that Chris Lazari, a billionaire London property developer, emigrated from Cyprus aged 16, with just £20?

Reviewed: Marcia Haydée

Created by Edwardx (talk). Self nominated at 20:45, 26 March 2015 (UTC).

New enough, long enough but the phrase "in his pocket" - a nice colloquialism - is taken directly from the Forbes article. It ought to be rephrased both in the WP article and in the hook. It could be removed altogether from the hook. The hook itself is good. QPQ done. FunkyCanute (talk) 09:54, 28 March 2015 (UTC)

Thanks. Hook and article tweaked. Edwardx (talk) 11:08, 28 March 2015 (UTC)

Good to go. FunkyCanute (talk) 11:47, 28 March 2015 (UTC)