Template:Did you know nominations/Erling Steen

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:45, 17 July 2012 (UTC)

Erling Steen[edit]

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... that while incarcerated at the Grini concentration camp during World War II, Erling Steen served as personnel manager of the camp?

Created/expanded by Geschichte (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 12:40, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

How about adding the word "underground" or "resistance" in front of personnel? So it doesn't sound like he was a collaborator? Manxruler (talk) 17:10, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

Support. Good suggestion. Oceanh (talk) 20:28, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

Length, date, sourcing ok. Main source is an offline biographical encyclopedia, accepted in good faith. Because of that and because the sources are in Norwegian, I can't check for copyright issues. Hook OK as proposed above: "that while incarcerated at the Grini concentration camp during World War II, Erling Steen led the camp's Norwegian resistance members?" QPQ not applicable. Note: the source link [1] is broken and should be fixed. Sandstein 09:28, 17 July 2012 (UTC)