The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 10:58, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
I don't like any of the hooks. ALT-1 sounds too complicated, ALT-2 I don't like the phrase edge of habitability since I don't think it conveys the message well. ALT-4 and the original are inaccurate to say that the planet is habitable.
I'd be willing to pass ALT-3 or the alt I am offering as I think they convey the right message and are factually true to the source article. Let me know which you prefer, and strikeout the ones you do not. --Odie5533 (talk) 00:38, 2 September 2011 (UTC)
ALT-5 is catchy and I prefer it to the rest. Thanks. SurajT 04:21, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
Everything else checks out. I changed South France to Southern France to avoid a redirect. --Odie5533 (talk) 05:41, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
The bit about "southern France" came from http://www.centauri-dreams.org , which appears to be a blog. I'm not sure how reliable this is. I'm moving ALT5 to P2 without this bit. --PFHLai (talk) 10:58, 5 September 2011 (UTC)