Template:Did you know nominations/Nakayama Tadachika

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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 01:12, 17 October 2012 (UTC)

Nakayama Tadachika

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... that Nakayama Tadachika wrote Questions and Answers on Court Matters?

Reviewed: Babë Dud Karbunara

Created/expanded by Bamse (talk). Self nom at 22:24, 13 October 2012 (UTC)

Length is OK, date is OK; sources seem fine, as far as I can tell anyway; necessarily assuming good faith on copyvios/close paraphrasing etc, as I don't know Japanese. The topic is interesting enough and the article is well-written. Just one thing, it needs a proper intro per WP:LEAD; the current one-line lead doesn't really do the job. Could you address this before I sign it off? Prioryman (talk) 20:44, 16 October 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for the review. I expanded the lead. Let me know how you like it. bamse (talk) 21:25, 16 October 2012 (UTC)

This looks fine to me. Good work! Prioryman (talk) 21:40, 16 October 2012 (UTC)