Template:Did you know nominations/Panzer Dragoon Orta
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The result was: promoted by Red-tailed hawk (talk) 15:34, 17 March 2023 (UTC)
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Panzer Dragoon Orta
- ... that although most sources call Panzer Dragoon Orta's story a sequel to Panzer Dragoon Saga's, developers have said that it might reflect an alternative timeline? Source: "My interpretation is that the title “Orta” also sounds like “alter,” as in “alternative.” There’s a little play on words, and it implies that “Orta” is an alternative story. Maybe Orta is a prequel and an alternative to PDS." [1]
Improved to Good Article status by Bryanrutherford0 (talk) and ProtoDrake (talk). Nominated by Bryanrutherford0 (talk) at 15:03, 4 February 2023 (UTC). Note: As of October 2022, all changes made to promoted hooks will be logged by a bot. The log for this nomination can be found at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Panzer Dragoon Orta, so please watch a successfully closed nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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@Bryanrutherford0: Good article, but I have a problem with the hook. Firstly, I feel that saying most sources calling it a sequel would need to be a bit more supported, especially since the article mentions "Pre-release interviews stated that Orta was a sequel to the other Panzer Dragoon games and set decades after the events of Saga" which isn't really the same thing for me. Onegreatjoke (talk) 23:29, 5 February 2023 (UTC)
- That's a fair point. Maybe it could be rewritten to be closer to the wording in the text of the article? -Bryan Rutherford (talk) 02:26, 6 February 2023 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that although previews called Panzer Dragoon Orta's story a sequel to Panzer Dragoon Saga's, developers have said that it might reflect an alternative timeline?
I'd say that's a better hook. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:03, 6 February 2023 (UTC)
