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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 02:01, 2 June 2023 (UTC)

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Penelope (platypus)

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Created by Crunchydillpickle (talk). Self-nominated at 06:53, 13 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Penelope (platypus); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: No - See below.
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Article moved to mainspace on 13 May, and is well beyond the required minimum length. All sources are, as far as I can tell, reliable for the material they are cited for—though I have not been able to access all of them. Earwig reveals no overt copyvio, but there is some WP:Close paraphrasing. There are no obvious neutrality issues. Both hooks are interesting; I prefer ALT0. ALT0 has a problem with "zoologists" (see below); ALT1 I would have to WP:AGF on as I can't access the cited source. This is the nominator's first nomination, so they are QPQ exempt. Some comments about the content:

  • Verifying this gets a bit annoying, as some information can be verified by sources that are cited in the article but not in the proper place.
  • "Platypusery" should either be "platypusary" or "platypussary". This occurs twice.
  • Cecil and Penelope slept during the days except for their hour-long break to see visitors. At night, they came out to eat dinner of 25 to 35 live crayfish, 200 to 300 worms, one frog, several scrambled eggs, and mud. – WP:Close paraphrasing; the source says Cecil and Penelope never varied in their basic routine: they slept by day (with an hour's break for visitors), came out at night for dinner (25 to 35 live crayfish, 200 to 300 worms, one frog, several scrambled eggs, add mud and stir).
  • Cecil would bit onto her flat tail and hold on as Penelope waddled around her the pool – this needs copyediting: "bit" should be "bite" and "around her the pool" is an anacoluthon.
  • Zookeepers were eager to see captive platypuses mate because – this is not in the cited source, nor can it be since the cited source here is from 1944.
  • scratching with her twenty claws is a rather conspicuous paraphrase of the source's scratching furiously with all of her 20 sharp claws.
  • The next year, during the North American mating season in the spring, Penelope was more receptive to Cecil's presence. – that's not what the source says. The source says that Penelope acted the same way in the spring of 1952 as in the spring of 1951, and did not change her demeanour until June. The reference to a North American mating season is not in the source and extremely dubious considering that platypuses are not native to North America (or the Northern hemisphere at all, for that matter).
  • Zoologists reported that they "had been duped" by Penelope, calling her a "faker" and accusing her of "posing as an expectant mother just to lead a life of luxury on double rations". – the source does not attribute this to zoologists but to "Officials at New York's Bronx Zoo". You could write "zookeepers" instead.
  • Am I to infer that the entirety of the first paragraph in the "Escape from the zoo" section comes from the NYT article cited in the middle?
  • In 1958, the Bronx Zoo received three more platypuses named Paul, Patty, and Pamela. All three died within their first year in North America. Cecil died two years after Penelope's disappearance. – not in the cited source.

Ping Crunchydillpickle. TompaDompa (talk) 23:16, 13 May 2023 (UTC)

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