Template:Did you know nominations/The Maire of Bristowe is Kalendar

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The result was: promoted by Alex Shih ^Talk 05:42, 6 August 2013 (UTC)

The Maire of Bristowe is Kalendar[edit]

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... that The Maire of Bristowe is Kalendar is a late 15th-century manuscript recording the histories of England and of Bristol, the civic customs and list of mayors?

Reviewed: Britt Westbourne

Created by Jezhotwells (talk). Self nominated at 16:49, 1 August 2013 (UTC).

(AGF on print source.) Technicals all fine. I wonder if, if I am right to say that there is a list of mayors and civic customs of Bristol and not London, that it might be better phrased (or some third variant):

... that The Maire of Bristowe is Kalendar is a late 15th-century manuscript recording both the history of England and the history of Bristol, its civic customs and a list of its mayors?

Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 20:32, 1 August 2013 (UTC)

I like this, hook improved. Jezhotwells (talk) 09:34, 2 August 2013 (UTC)