Template:Did you know nominations/Tom Oberheim
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- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:45, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
Tom Oberheim
[edit]- ... that before Tom Oberheim started Oberheim Electronics, he was the first ARP synthesizer dealer on the US West Coast, and sold an ARP synthesizer to Frank Zappa?
5x expanded by Synthfiend (talk). Self nom at 13:40, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
- Hook: Short enough, I guess it's somewhat interesting, cited
- Article: New enough, long enough, image is from Flickr and licensed correctly. Return of Oberheim, Synthesizer designer, and early years all have unreferenced information. Randomly checking a link (Joel Chadabe, "The Electronic Century Part III: Computers and Analog Synthesizers", Electronic Musician, Apr 2001) shows it to be dead.
- Summary: Please fix referencing and use archives so the dead links can be accessed. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:07, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you for the feedback. Fixed the links. Sorry about that. Also added a couple more points of in-line reference. Please let me know if you think other corrections are needed.synthfiend (talk) 02:59, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
- The ARP can be pipe linked to ARP Instruments, Inc., as in ARP synthesizer. Cheers! Binksternet (talk) 03:10, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you for the feedback. Fixed the links. Sorry about that. Also added a couple more points of in-line reference. Please let me know if you think other corrections are needed.synthfiend (talk) 02:59, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
- Good to go! Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:13, 6 September 2011 (UTC)