Template:Did you know nominations/Yank Robinson
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 15:47, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
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Yank Robinson[edit]
- ... that Yank Robinson (pictured) was among his league's Offensive WAR leaders three consecutive years, set the major league record for single-season walks and died of tuberculosis at 34?
- Reviewed: Man About Town
5x expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self nominated at 03:54, 7 June 2014 (UTC).
Expanded 2 June, nominated 7 June, therefore new enough; also long enough. QPQ done. No problems with disambig links or with access to external links. Hook is acceptable and short enough. It is sourced to online citation #1 for "among his league's offensive WAR leaders", and offline cittion #6 for "died of tuberculosis at age 34", accepted AGF (but see issue 1 below). The article is written in an objective manner and neutral style, and is fully cited. I love the bits about his stubbornness and his drinking, and his highs and lows in the sport, his confidence on the pitch and most of all his shy, self-conscious pose on the cigarette card. This kind of mix makes this article one of the better biographies on WP, IMO; you don't have to be a baseball fan to see that - so congratulations. Issues: (1) I cannot find the source in citation #1 for hook element "set the major lead record for walks"' this is frankly because I do not understand baseball. No need to explain anything (my brain will pixellate, I am after all British); just tell me it is there and - when you've finished laughing - I'll accept it AGF. (2) "ill-fillings" is a typo; you mean "ill feelings". When issues 1 and 2 are resolved, this nom should be OK. --Storye book (talk) 15:09, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
I found that info in the source and corrected that typo (since I've refrained from my bibulous habits I've been a great help to the team). If Storye book says the other criteria check out I believe her (her, her not him). Belle (talk) 00:16, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks Bellemora. Fn. 6 does, in fact, show the progression on the MLB record for walks and, yes, it was feeling not filling. Apologies for the delay in responding; I was traveling away from my home country for the last half of the month. Cbl62 (talk) 23:00, 30 June 2014 (UTC)
I was obliged to pull this one from the queue as there was a challenge to the "offensive WAR" statement. I don't understand baseball at all so someone will have to show me how this hook statement was derived. Gatoclass (talk) 11:13, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
- @ Belle and Cbl62 (or anyone who understands baseball). Re the above question by Gatoclass - can you help? --Storye book (talk) 11:33, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
- I pointed out the ref at DYK talk. ([1] Second column, first row under "Appearances on Leader Boards, Awards, and Honors"), but Gatoclass didn't see it in time to return the hook. Belle (talk) 11:38, 1 July 2014 (UTC) P.S. I'm totally the DYK Baseball Stats Queen now. Cbl62, if you need any pointers let me know. (despite not having the first clue about the game; strike, home run, there's no crying in baseball; that's it) Belle (talk) 11:45, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
Good to go for the next time anybody is building a prep. Belle (talk) 11:38, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks Bellemora. Fn. 6 does, in fact, show the progression on the MLB record for walks and, yes, it was feeling not filling. Apologies for the delay in responding; I was traveling away from my home country for the last half of the month. Cbl62 (talk) 23:00, 30 June 2014 (UTC)
