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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Jasmeet Singh Ahluwalia. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 19:35, 29 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jasmeet Singh Ahluwalia (June 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Bonadea were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Very little of the content is sourced. No verification of the claim that he founded the hospital (the source, a very brief notice, says he is the head of one section of the hospital).

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Jasmeet Singh Ahluwalia and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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bonadea contributions talk 11:50, 3 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, 124.253.156.45! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! bonadea contributions talk 11:50, 3 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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