User talk:Allencoh
Your submission at Articles for creation: MyRegistry.com (June 18)
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Hello! Allencoh,
I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Chris Troutman (talk) 18:17, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
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@Chris Troutman: I am completely confused with Wiki and I'm about to give up. Can you please specify what part of the article is "advertisement?" I ran this past four other people and I'm sorry, but I just don't understand your opinion. I am pleading with you...please show me the way! I would so greatly appreciate it. Thank you so much in advance. Allencoh (talk) 20:11, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
- The article has a "features" section! That information has no "so what" value; it's there to advertise. Take a look at Amazon.com. It's about Amazon from a disinterested third-party point of view. It's not providing "rah-rah, good stuff about Amazon" nonsense. I'm not saying that the features listed aren't correct; they likely are. My point is that Wikipedia is not here to advertise.
- There's three ways you can do this: I can gut your submission and rewrite it and you can resubmit it, or you can rewrite it yourself and resubmit, or you can place a request at the reward board. I've reviewed your submission once and will not be reviewing it again. Chris Troutman (talk) 01:48, 19 June 2014 (UTC)
@Chris Troutman: I would so appreciate it for the former of the three choices...I'd be indebted to you if you would rewrite it and submit it. I completely respect your advice and therefore would be honored if you resubmitted it after your rewrite. Thank you in advance! Let me know. Best, Allencoh (talk) 14:33, 19 June 2014 (UTC)
- I've completely re-written it. I'm not making an accusation, but if someone were told to write this article on behalf of another party, they should be aware that it makes more sense to hire a professional editor rather than attempt to "do it yourself." Taking screenshots from the company's "in the media" website and lazily copying phrases directly from source material is a poor method of drafting an article. I'd also like to point out that while many companies would balk at the inclusion of criticism in a Wikipedia article about them, negative coverage is good for inches of text and reliable independent sources, not to mention definite neutral point of view.
- You are welcome to resubmit this entry. I'll have nothing more to do with it. Chris Troutman (talk) 07:36, 20 June 2014 (UTC)
@Chris Troutman: Well, thank you and I do appreciate it. Allencoh (talk) 13:53, 20 June 2014 (UTC)
I didn't see the submission waiting for review yellow box, so I regret to say that I did it two more times. Please excuse my ignorance--can someone delete the two unnecessary boxes? Please! Allencoh (talk) 13:52, 20 June 2014 (UTC)
Your submission at AfC MyRegistry.com was accepted
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Jamesx12345 22:27, 26 June 2014 (UTC)The file File:MyRegistry.com logo.png has been proposed for deletion because of the following concern:
Aged logo, superseded by File:Myregistry-green.png. No current or future use.
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