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Your submission at Articles for creation: John McVay (September 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Whispering was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Also, articles cannot have external links in article space per Wikipedia:External links.

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Whispe ring 03:54, 25 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:John McVay concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:John McVay, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:37, 26 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello BansrifromPact, welcome to Wikipedia! Thanks for contributing the draft article about John McVay, and for your clarity over your relationship with McVay/Pact.

Although I have accepted the article and moved it to main space under the title John McVay (producer), the copy you submitted was not acceptable and I have rewritten it entirely. This is because: (1) the material you submitted was copied from his biography at Pact, which is not permitted because of copyright concerns; and (2) it was not written in the necessary neutral and unbiased fashion.

If you wish to contribute to this article, given your company affiliation, the preferred route is to discuss your proposed changes on the article's talk page, providing supporting evidence (links, etc) for your material. Sources independent of the subject and of Pact are necessary, such as books, or newspaper & academic journal articles. Before contributing, please read carefully the encyclopedia's policies on copyright and on conflict of interest, and make sure that you comply with them. Espresso Addict (talk) 00:05, 26 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]