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Your submission at Articles for creation[edit]
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- Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Mrmatiko (talk) 20:11, 14 February 2012 (UTC)
There are several key things that concern me/that you can do:
- The article relies too heavily on extremely positive quotes
- "She continued to grow as a dancer" isn't really very neutral or encyclopedic
- ditto "graced the cover", "extremely versatile" and "DDS also conducted an exclusive interview"
I would also suggest removing the empty <ref></ref> tags from the top of the article --Mrmatiko (talk) 20:27, 14 February 2012 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation[edit]
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- Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Bmusician 06:59, 15 February 2012 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation[edit]
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Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:00, 5 March 2012 (UTC)