User talk:MedicalMrMoose

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Hello, Emilio Pac at NHMA, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.

I noticed that one of the first articles you edited was Draft:National Hispanic Medical Association, which appears to be dealing with a topic with which you may have a conflict of interest. In other words, you may find it difficult to write about that topic in a neutral and objective way, because you are, work for, or represent, the subject of that article. Your recent contributions may have already been undone for this very reason.

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Hi UserSRG,

Thanks for getting back to me fast. I'll request to change my name as soon as possible. So far, from what you read, do you believe the tone of the article sound neutral enough? Which sections do you believe require some improvement?

Best,

Emilio Pac Emilio Pac at NHMA (talk) 18:32, 25 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Please read the links above, especially the one in bold. Please see the comments I left on the draft and read the links I provided there as well. - UtherSRG (talk) 19:00, 25 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: National Hispanic Medical Association (May 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by UtherSRG was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Cannot use an organization's own website or their own journal as sources to assert notability. Removing those sources, there is vastly too much unsourced information, and very little assertion of notability. Please again read WP:YFA as well as WP:42. Furthermore, external links, other than those used in citations, are not allowed in the main body of the article and need to be removed to an External links section.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:National Hispanic Medical Association and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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UtherSRG (talk) 16:50, 25 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Emilio Pac at NHMA! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! UtherSRG (talk) 16:50, 25 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: National Hispanic Medical Association (June 6)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

press releases are not independent sources and we don't use external links in the body of an article.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:National Hispanic Medical Association and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Theroadislong (talk) 18:26, 6 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: National Hispanic Medical Association (June 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by UtherSRG was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Can't verify the Wooster links as they all require a login. The Harvard reference does not support the tagged assertion.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:National Hispanic Medical Association and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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UtherSRG (talk) 01:10, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I'll get right to it. Thanks! :D MedicalMrMoose (talk) 13:35, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Paid editing

As previously advised, your edits give the impression you have a financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. You were asked to cease editing until you responded by either stating that you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits, or by complying with the mandatory requirements under the Wikimedia Terms of Use that you disclose your employer, client and affiliation. Again, you can post such a disclosure on your user page at User:MedicalMrMoose, and the template {{Paid}} can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: {{paid|user=MedicalMrMoose|employer=InsertName|client=InsertName}}. Please respond before making any other edits to Wikipedia. Theroadislong (talk) 15:34, 9 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Theroadislong,

It is not a paid edit, I am actually doing this for academic reasons. I am supposed to do a Wikipedia page on some topic that impacts my community in D.C. I am aware it looks very suspicious, however, I really am doing this for a quick and easy summer credit.

Hope this clears any misunderstanding.

Best,

-MMM MedicalMrMoose (talk) 15:40, 9 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:National Hispanic Medical Association has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:National Hispanic Medical Association. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 16:02, 9 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:National Hispanic Medical Association has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:National Hispanic Medical Association. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 16:50, 9 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: National Hispanic Medical Association (October 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Johannes Maximilian was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please fix the WP:PUFFERY in this draft. --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 11:23, 16 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:National Hispanic Medical Association and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 11:23, 16 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]