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Your submission at Articles for creation: Melissa Del Pinto (May 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Majora was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please only include references that are being used to verify content. Please also keep in mind that material on Wikipedia should always be a summary of what has been said in the references. The inline citation should come immediately after the sentence the reference is being used for.

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Majora (talk) 04:35, 30 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Frank Cianciullo, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Majora (talk) 04:35, 30 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Melissa Del Pinto (March 9)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DrStrauss was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Specifically the second paragraph in the introduction and the use of weasel words such as "perfected" which compromise the overall NPOV.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DrStrauss talk 10:26, 9 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Melissa Del Pinto (March 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Acalycine was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Definitely not. Using phrases like "WANDERLUST proposed to us that although we have the ability to fly to different places" and writing in unencyclopedic abstract phrases about the nature of the subject's work will prohibit your article from being accepted.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Acalycine (talk) 03:48, 12 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Melissa Del Pinto (April 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Winged Blades of Godric was:

Remove advertorial tone from Selected Exhibits section.Also, use more WP:RS critically reviewing her work.

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Winged Blades^Godric 05:59, 24 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Melissa Del Pinto has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Melissa Del Pinto. Thanks! Drewmutt (^ᴥ^) talk 23:40, 26 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Melissa Del Pinto (May 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Drewmutt was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Drewmutt (^ᴥ^) talk 23:41, 26 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Melissa Del Pinto (June 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DrStrauss was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please see WP:42

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DrStrauss talk 09:09, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Melissa Del Pinto concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Melissa Del Pinto, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:31, 10 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Melissa Del Pinto

Hello, Frank Cianciullo. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Melissa Del Pinto".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 18:00, 22 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Melissa Del Pinto has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Melissa Del Pinto. Thanks! Legacypac (talk) 17:45, 18 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]