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Your submission at Articles for creation: Closed Coke Slurry System process (August 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Narutolovehinata5 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 04:30, 30 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Hans J. Bittermann, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 04:30, 30 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Hans J. Bittermann (talk) 07:37, 26 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Sir I added two new references to my article Closed Coke Slurry System process (I know: with formal mistakes...) Is that OK for you? Best Hans J. Bittermann (Hans J. Bittermann (talk) 14:50, 31 August 2017 (UTC)) Hans J. Bittermann (talk) 14:50, 31 August 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Closed Coke Slurry System process (December 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Seraphim System was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

some advert like language in the CCSS section, and the sourcing needs to be improved, patents are primary sources, we need secondary sources for notability

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Seraphim System ^(talk) 02:41, 14 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Closed Coke Slurry System process concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Closed Coke Slurry System process, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:32, 15 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]