User talk:Loeraas
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[edit]Hello, Loeraas, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:30, 23 January 2018 (UTC)
Hi Loerass, thank you for your contribution! There's a lot of good material here, but some improvements are needed before it is ready for mainspace. I have moved the article back to draft space (Draft:Post - 1500 Southeast Asia Archaeology), where it can be worked on in peace ;) When spruced up, you can move it into mainspace again.
The specific issues needing attention are these:
- The article is structured like an essay rather than an encyclopedia article. Articles do not have an Introduction nor a Conclusion. You should not try to make a structured argument (as is the aim of an essay) but to present structured information only. Fortunately it is easier to turn an essay into an article than the other way round! Please remove the Introduction and Conclusion sections, integrating all necessary material from them into other sections. The add a WP:LEAD that summarizes the article contents (it generally needs no referencing because it should contain only material already referenced in the main text).
- Please add categories to make the article detectable in a variety of indices.
- Please go through the text and add wikilinks where appropriate. The idea here is to create hyperlinks to other articles if it is likely that the reader would like more information on a subject touched on in this article. Only link terms that are not common or in everyday use, and only link them on the first occurrence. E.g., Silk Road would be a useful link, but Spanish would not.
- Finally, try to look at other related articles and create wikilinks to this article, so that it is integrated into the web of hyperlinks and interested readers have a chance to stumble upon it. This often can also be done as entries in a "See also" section. E.g., a link in the "See also" of History of Indonesia might be appropriate.
- I don't think the title is that well chosen. As you note, the article is about the history of colonization in Southeast Asia; I would suggest naming it thus, then making the statement in the text (IF it can be referenced - there doesn't seem to be a source for that ATM) that Post-1500s SEA archaeology is often referred to as such.
I hope this is helpful. Let me know if you have any questions. Cheers --Elmidae (talk · contribs) 10:29, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
Please don't move that draft back into mainspace before the author has had time to address the issues discussed on their talk page. --Elmidae (talk · contribs) 08:23, 26 March 2018 (UTC)