User talk:Marc Eteer/SESVanderHave NV
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Hello @Drm310, I'm not sure if I am doing this the right way. But as you've suggested here, I tried to create a subpage for this draft. Can you check it and let me know what you think? Is it objective enough, am I on the right track? Thank you for your help! Marc Eteer (talk) 10:07, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
- The draft reads as promotional. You will need to write with a more neutral tone. Phrases like "global player" and "specializes in every aspect" could only appear in an article if they were quotes to a specific person who holds that opinion.
- As for establishing notability as it applies to companies, I think you have more work to do. You cannot rely on the works of the company or its employees to establish notability. For that, you need in-depth, independent reporting about the company with the additional hurdle that the news articles are not classified as routine. That can be a stiff challenge. — jmcgnh(talk) (contribs) 20:20, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
- In addition to agreeing with what jmcgnh said, there are also a couple of minor points:
- The Ukrainian capital city should be spelled as Kyiv, per this convention on Ukrainian place names.
- In your citation templates like
{{cite web}}
, any source that is not English should include the language parameter, to indicate the language of the source. For example, a Dutch source should include the parameter|language=nl
.
- --Drm310 🍁 (talk) 20:39, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
- In addition to agreeing with what jmcgnh said, there are also a couple of minor points: