User talk:Millieahlstrom
Welcome to The Wikipedia Adventure![edit]
- Hi Millieahlstrom! We're so happy you wanted to play to learn, as a friendly and fun way to get into our community and mission. I think these links might be helpful to you as you get started.
-- 23:06, Monday, May 28, 2018 (UTC)
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Hi from Mike[edit]
Just leaving a message on your Talk page to say hi. Look forward to seeing what you do with that wētā article, and don't be shy about reaching out if you get stuck. There are lots of people in Wikipedia happy to help out when they realise you're a new editor and doing your best. —Giantflightlessbirds (talk) 23:57, 28 May 2018 (UTC)
- Hi, thank you! I will definitely be in touch. (Millieahlstrom (talk) 00:09, 29 May 2018 (UTC))
- I checked out how the page is going and made a few minor changes: references outside punctuation, and cleaned up one reference a bit – you may want to go through and do the same to the other refs. Also the page could do with a read through and copy edit; there are a few typos. But it's a great start! You have plenty of references, and now need to think about what the structure of the page should be based on what's known about this species, and write some clear paragraphs for each section. The first section, the head, should be an abstract of the whole article and doesn't need extensive references: see this guide in the Manual of Style. I'll touch base with you both soon and offer some more suggestions. —Giantflightlessbirds (talk) 09:07, 12 June 2018 (UTC)
- Hi, thanks for that! I am having trouble with where I will place everything, so just trying to figure that out. I will have a look at the link that you sent, thanks, there's quite a few little rules I think I have missed so it's helpful to have your input. Will talk soon. Millieahlstrom (talk) 01:32, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
- I checked out how the page is going and made a few minor changes: references outside punctuation, and cleaned up one reference a bit – you may want to go through and do the same to the other refs. Also the page could do with a read through and copy edit; there are a few typos. But it's a great start! You have plenty of references, and now need to think about what the structure of the page should be based on what's known about this species, and write some clear paragraphs for each section. The first section, the head, should be an abstract of the whole article and doesn't need extensive references: see this guide in the Manual of Style. I'll touch base with you both soon and offer some more suggestions. —Giantflightlessbirds (talk) 09:07, 12 June 2018 (UTC)