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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (January 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sam-2727 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Eliminate the all caps "BAREFOOT" and fluffy language such as "Suggitt is no stranger to extreme endurance adventures" and this would be a good article.

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Sam-2727 (talk) 15:49, 11 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, NeilCHF! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Sam-2727 (talk) 15:49, 11 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments on User:NeilCHF/sandbox

Hi User:NeilCHF, I've been looking over your article and here are some comments I have:

[1] This is a dead link. Could you replace it with a copy that works so the information inside of it can be verified?
Provide reliable/verifiable citations for the section "Radio Work." Per WP:BLP policy, all statements made must be verifiable.
Could you provide citations for this?: "Suggitt returned to England and trained as a Web developer although he spent much of his time in Lake District National Park.

Suggitt is a qualified Aviator, beginning his flying on microlight aircraft, moving onto flying gliders and then fixed wing aircraft."?

Also a citation for this: In 2018, Suggitt was asked to become an ambassador for Hartlepool Ambulance Charity, a charity set up to help local lives in his hometown of Hartlepool that empowers the community with lifesaving skills, a defibrillator rollout program and providing medic cover across the town.

2019 saw Suggitt raise many thousands of pounds for The Chris Lucas Trust,a Childrens Cancer Trust helping fight Rhabdomyosarcoma and Hartlepool Ambulance Charity through his barefoot endurance adventure.

and this: "Suggitt uses his adventures as a foundation for his speaking events in schools and institutions with his primary aim of helping to inspire the next generation of adventurers and those who have a love for adventure."
Remove any parts of the "accomplishments" section that you can't find a citation for (and add citations for the ones you can)

Should be perfect after that! Let me know if you have any other questions. Sam-2727 (talk) 04:51, 12 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

User:NeilCHF/sandbox

Hello, NeilCHF. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, User:NeilCHF/sandbox.

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it. — JJMC89 (T·C) 07:14, 16 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]