It's too short. Paragraphs need to be 6 to 8 sentences long. I looked at the Enciclopedia page and there is enough information to make the Economy, Geography and Social Infrastructure and Communications sections long enough. I went into Pro Quest in the Digital libary and got three hits for the name of the town if you need more information. I also see that you were working on this during class.Thelmadatter (talk) 22:43, 1 October 2010 (UTC)
Helo My name is Oscar Brum Ramírez and I am studying a Bachelor in Interlational Business in the TEC de Monterrey located in Mexico City. I am new in this and I do not know how to use Wikipedia, my teacher makes it look really easy but it is actually not. I play american football at a local team, I like sports and music. --Oscarbrum (talk) 23:27, 4 October 2010 (UTC)
i am gaby.
i am part of your team of the biccentenial project. see you soon. grrbibi18 19:21, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
Hello there, Oscarbrum! I'm Netalarm and I have been around for quite some time now. I'm messaging you because I've noticed that you've indicated that you want to be adopted on your user page. I'd be more than happy to help you find a match for an adopter. All you have to do is fill out the survey located here so I can have the necessary information to match you up. Of course, you may also choose your own adopter - the instructions to do so are also on that page. If you have any questions, feel free to message me on my talk page.
hi oscar my email is firstname.lastname@example.org. ou can send me your info at this mail. thank you. see you tomorrow.--Grrbibi18 02:15, 12 October 2010 (UTC)
hello oscar, i'm viridiana and we are in the same team of the bicentennial article. i'm going to check your part and you my part. i have already submitted it, so you can look at it. see you in the class VB (talk) 19:23, 13 October 2010 (UTC)
list of articles online so far
As of now, I see the following articles being worked on Street marketing, PyMEs in Mexico, The Eyes of My Princess, Diagnostic Enterprise Method, El Tepeyac National Park, Alpura (company), Bernardo Quintana Arrioja and User:Oscarbrum/Epitafio De Un Asesino. I will be on WP most of this evening (until a reasonable hour) poking around. Leave me a message and if Im online, Ill respond quickly.Thelmadatter (talk) 22:32, 21 October 2010 (UTC)
Ive gotten a message warning about copyright violations in student work. Ive told the Wikipedian to feel free to tag any copyright violations that appear. Please realize that if this appears on your article and is not addressed, you will lose points on your grade.Thelmadatter (talk) 15:34, 4 November 2010 (UTC)