User talk:PCK1992
PCK1992, you are invited to the Teahouse!
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Hi PCK1992! Thanks for contributing to Wikipedia. Be our guest at the Teahouse! The Teahouse is a friendly space where new editors can ask questions about contributing to Wikipedia and get help from peers and experienced editors. I hope to see you there! Technical 13 (I'm a Teahouse host) This message was delivered automatically by your robot friend, HostBot (talk) 17:23, 14 April 2015 (UTC) |
Viola Klein
[edit]Hi PCK1992, please take a look at the article you recently created. There are a few issues that need to be addressed:
- Citation style. Wikipedia has a particular style of inline citations to help readers find references easily. Most of the existing references are (AUTHOR, YEAR) form, which is not the usual form used on the encyclopedia.
- Sections. Please try to divide some of the longer sections into subsections, so that it is easier to navigate.
- Tone. The article reads like an essay. Please see WP:TONE and WP:NOTESSAY for more guidelines.
This is a very good article, but it can be improved. Thanks for your time! TYelliot | Talk | Contribs 14:23, 16 April 2015 (UTC)