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Dear Larry,

I appreciate your invitation send communications by e-mail. I know how precious your time is - and this will streamline communiqué for better productivity all around.

Larry, your skillful guidance to develop the material by posting a "new material" request on the talk page of the article is most respected. I am entirely focused in your propositions. I have enormous confidence in your constructive assistance. Most importantly, I would like to thank you for reading the new material when thoroughly prepared - and inconspicuously conveying to me with supportive directions. In summary, I am immensely pleased with your thoughtfulness and attention to detail in every section. As such, I will provide the corroborating credentials - and I would like to praise you exceedingly for the superb effort you put in.

Sincerely yours,

Paul ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Kindly update the second paragraph listed under "Early life."

Current: "They learned to sail at Larchmont Yacht Club and started a sailing team at Mamaroneck High School.[2] Coleman and his twin Paul were both students at New York Maritime College and after competing in the 1976 470 Olympic trials, teamed up with Gerard in the Soling.[2

Please change it to;

New: "They learned to sail at Larchmont Yacht Club and started a sailing team at Mamaroneck High School.[2] When Coleman was 18, he entered Olympic Class sailing competitions in the Soling Class, and competed in the 1976 Olympic trials. Coleman and his twin Peter were both students at New York Maritime College, after competing in the 1976 Olympic trials, teamed up with Gerard in the Soling.[2

Paulcoleman (talk) 17:43, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Larry,

Thank you for your email. This is very helpful. I am pleased to deliver the application request itself placed on the talk page associated with my IP address. In summary, it is posted on <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Paul_Coleman_(sailor)>. This is now accomplished.

Larry, your skilled direction to advance the material by posting a "new material" request on the talk page of the article is most appreciated. I am completely attentive in your suggestions. I have huge assurance in your productive help. Most significantly, I would like to thank you for reading the new material when carefully organized - and clearly conveying to me with helpful guidelines.

In summary, I am enormously delighted with your thoughtfulness and courtesy with detail in every section. As such, I will provide the substantiating credentials - and I would like to praise you immeasurably for the outstanding work you put in.

Sincerely yours,

Paul Coleman

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Kindly update the second paragraph listed under "Early life."

Current:

"They learned to sail at Larchmont Yacht Club and started a sailing team at Mamaroneck High School.[2] Coleman and his twin Paul were both students at New York Maritime College and after competing in the 1976 470 Olympic trials, teamed up with Gerard in the Soling.[2

Please change it to;

New:

"They learned to sail at Larchmont Yacht Club and started a sailing team at Mamaroneck High School.[2] When Coleman was 18, he entered Olympic Class sailing competitions in the Soling Class, and competed in the 1976 Olympic trials. Coleman and his twin Peter were both students at New York Maritime College, after competing in the 1976 Olympic trials, teamed up with Gerard in the Soling.[2

Wrong venue. Please move to Talk:Paul Coleman (sailor)
 – This request belongs on the talk page indicated. Please make your request there. Regards,Spintendo ᔦᔭ 02:35, 3 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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{{edit COI}} Please add that attached picture. https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:TeamColeman1.jpg --Paulcoleman (talk) 19:55, 7 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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{{edit COI}} Please add that attached picture. https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:TeamColeman1.jpg --Paulcoleman (talk) 20:44, 7 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Dear Photo Submission Department,

Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. I’d love to help make sure these concepts related to Wikipedia are detailed as simply as possible while remaining comprehensive and precise. I’m very open to collaboration and excited to work with the community to contribute to the Wikipedia mission. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so, in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help. From this prospective, following the guiding principles outlined for the proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material, my research colleagues are asking (respectfully) that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. As such, I have attached the photo that may be added to the article as the editor deems the appropriate manner. Kindly note, I can e-mail scanned copies to anyone who might want to see supplemental original source material.

Please let me know if you have questions about my purpose and efforts here. Ideally, I’d like someone to review what I’m suggesting, give feedback, and, once the draft is in good shape, move the new material to the live article. Because there is quite a bit of material out there that is not currently revealed in this entry, my principal objective is to provide more original source detail. I made sure to familiarize myself with Wikipedia's content policies before writing, and I tried to uphold an impartial point of view and use only certifiable, published sources.

If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this. Thank you for your valued consideration!

Sincerely yours,

Paul J. Coleman

please add picture to article: File:TeamColeman1.jpg Paulcoleman (talk) 19:47, 20 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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I’m trying to add File:Pcolemancup1.jpg but it won’t let me. It said source needs to be provided. I believe the source is included. plz help

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That file does not exist. Please do not activate edit request templates on your own editor account talk page. These templates are for use on article talk pages only. Thank you. Spintendo      21:44, 20 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

perfect

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This is very helpful.

Information icon Hello, Paulcoleman. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a COI may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:

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Also please note that editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Breaking sticks (talk) 23:40, 1 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Dear Breaking sticks,

I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so, in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help. I’m very open to collaboration, and excited to work with the community to contribute to Wikipedia. Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. From this prospective, following the guiding principles outlined for the proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material, my research colleagues are asking (respectfully) that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. As such, I have attached the "edit request" that may be added to the article as the editor deems the appropriate manner.

If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this. Thank you for your valued consideration!

Cheers -


Some time ago, this was in the article with references.

| nationality =  United States of America | height = 6 ft 1 in (1.85 m) | weight = 163 lb (74 kg)

After COI purge this was deleted. An interested Wikipedia reader might like to view this with the corresponding image. I believe this detail, with this image (caption included) would add to the article. The other sailboats could be cropped out if the editors deemed them irrelevant. Please note, We are missing a big piece of history in the fact that sailing vessels today travel rather briskly through the water. If fellow editors see this as appropriate, it would be very insightful to reinstate these details with the matching image. Ideally, I’d like someone to review what I’m suggesting, give feedback, and, once the draft is in good shape, move this new material to the live article.

Soling on a reach

P.S. There is also a reference I can e-mail. Scanned copies are available to anyone who might want to see supplemental original source material. My principal objective is to provide more source detail. I made sure to familiarize myself with Wikipedia's content policies before writing. I tried to uphold an impartial point of view by using only certifiable, published sources.


1. please replace this version:

| classes = Soling, Etchells


2. with this version:

| classes = Maxi Class, Soling, Etchells, J/24, 470 (dinghy) Paulcoleman (talk) 00:16, 2 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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The J/24 was also added to the list. The NYTimes lists three only, and all three are now in the article's infobox. Spintendo      06:02, 2 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Dear Spintendo,

I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so, in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help. I’m very open to collaboration, and excited to work with the community to contribute to Wikipedia. Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. From this prospective, following the guiding principles outlined for the proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material, my editorial colleagues are asking (respectfully) that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. As such, I have attached the "edit request" that may be added to the article as the editor deems the appropriate manner.

If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this. Thank you for your valued consideration! Cheers - {{edit COI}} Replace Line 45 to read as follows:

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Paulcoleman (talk) 22:52, 5 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Dear Mr. Alex,

Thank you for your email. This is very helpful. Also, thank you for providing the helpful suggestions. These recommendations are positively helpful in pinpointing accurate material with encyclopedic reliance. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so, in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help. I’m very open to collaboration, and excited to work with the community to contribute to Wikipedia. Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. In this regard, please let me know what I can do to help.

Kindly note, I'm vigilant with employing information in support of the Wikipedia mission. From this prospective, following the guiding principles outlined for the proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material, my editorial colleagues are asking (respectfully) that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. As such, I have attached the "edit request" that may be added to the article as the editor deems the appropriate manner. If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this. One example is shown with respect to the article “Talk” page. In precise terms (for example), please see: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paul_Coleman_(sailor).

Thank you for your valued consideration! During the interim, do you know if I need to apply (or get special permission) to participate in this "edit" tab? Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter. Feel free to contact us directly should you have any questions. We are always happy to discuss further.

Have a nice day! Cheers!

Sincerely yours,

Paul

May 2018

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Warning icon Please stop your disruptive editing. If you continue to add soapboxing, promotional or advertising material to Wikipedia, you may be blocked from editing. Alexf(talk) 21:41, 13 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Dear Mr. Alex,

Thank you for your email. This is very helpful. Also, thank you for providing the helpful suggestions. These recommendations are positively helpful in pinpointing accurate material with encyclopedic reliance. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so, in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help. I’m very open to collaboration, and excited to work with the community to contribute to Wikipedia. Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. In this regard, please let me know what I can do to help.

Kindly note, I'm vigilant with employing information in support of the Wikipedia mission. From this prospective, following the guiding principles outlined for the proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material, my editorial colleagues are asking (respectfully) that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. As such, I have attached the "edit request" that may be added to the article as the editor deems the appropriate manner. If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this. One example is shown with respect to the article “Talk” page. In precise terms (for example), please see: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paul_Coleman_(sailor).

Thank you for your valued consideration! During the interim, do you know if I need to apply (or get special permission) to participate in this "edit" tab? Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter. Feel free to contact us directly should you have any questions. We are always happy to discuss further.

Have a nice day! Cheers!

Sincerely yours,

Paul

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Hello fellow Wikipedians,

Thank you for your email. This is very helpful. Also, thank you for providing the helpful suggestions. These recommendations are positively helpful in pinpointing accurate material with encyclopedic reliance. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so, in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help. I’m very open to collaboration, and excited to work with the community to contribute to Wikipedia. Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. In this regard, please let me know what I can do to help.

Kindly note, I'm vigilant with employing information in support of the Wikipedia mission. From this prospective, following the guiding principles outlined for the proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material, my editorial colleagues are asking (respectfully) that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. As such, I have suggestions that may be added to the article as the editor deems appropriate in manner to improve the article. Please take a minute for an appraisal my edit suggestions. If you have any requests for more source references, or new additions, please visit citations for supplementary material. If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this. Thank you for your valued consideration! During the interim, do you know if I need to apply (or get special permission) to participate in this "edit" tab? Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter. Feel free to contact us directly should you have any questions. We are always happy to make available supplementary open source citations.

Have a nice day! Cheers! Paulcoleman (talk) 21:21, 16 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Dear fellow Wikipedians, Many thanks for your electronic message. This is precise and helpful. Also, I acclaim your providing the helpful links. They absolutely make analytical updates to the material considerably more accessible. That said, I am attentive using information from this composing. One sample is displayed with respect to the article “Talk” page. In specific terms, the "edit" is updated. Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. I’d love to help make sure these concepts related to Wikipedia are detailed as simply as possible while remaining comprehensive and precise. I’m very open to collaboration and excited to work with the community to contribute to the Wikipedia mission. Cheers! 148.77.75.34 (talk) 22:41, 16 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Mr. Coleman, as I've stated before, the usage of templates such as this one for making edit requests is for use on the article talk page, not your own user talk page. Additionally, and once again, it is not clear what changes you want to be made. You have stated that "If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this." This appears to be an open request for help of an unspecified nature. So long as requests such as this go unspecified and, to a greater degree, unheeded, it is doubtful how much more instructive any advice could be that you haven't already received. I stand ready to assist you with any specific requests which you may have in the future. Please do have a wonderful day. .spintendo) 03:17, 17 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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{{edit COI}} Dear Spintendo‬ ,

Thank you for the magnificent job you are doing in expanding the Wikipedia mission. This contribution is perfect. My family and I are looking forward to serving on any Wikipedia committee to help make this mission a world-class success. Also, our foundation is now being made available to further support our editors.

Spintendo‬, your dedication really helps showcase Wikipedia's impressiveness. I just wanted to make sure you know how much we really appreciate all that you do. Also, I had a delightful conversation with other members of the Wikipedia community last weekend during our annual board meeting. They are so nice!

Have an awesome weekend! I look forward to catching up with you again. It will be great to learn more about the Wikipedia mission.

Cheers!

148.77.75.34 (talk) 16:29, 18 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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{{edit COI}} Dear Valeria,

I am interested in improving this page. If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know. In specific terms, I’d love to help making sure these concepts related to Wikipedia are detailed as simply as possible - while remaining comprehensive and precise. I’m very open to collaboration, and excited to work with the community to contribute to the Wikipedia mission.

Valeria, I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so in lieu of editing myself, I’m posting the picture here to find another editor to help with this additional photo. Please see attached. An interested Wikipedia reader might like to view this with the corresponding image. I believe this detail, with this image (caption included) would add to the article. The other sailboats could be cropped out if the editors deemed them irrelevant. Please note, we are missing a big piece of history in the fact that sailing vessels today travel rather briskly through the water. If fellow editors see this as appropriate, it would be very insightful to add these details with the matching image. Ideally, I’d like someone to review what I’m suggesting, give feedback, and, once the draft is in good shape, move this new material to the live article.

Soling on a reach

Cheers!

Paul Coleman Paulcoleman (talk) 19:15, 24 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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