User talk:SunriseLLC
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The article David H. Holtzman has been proposed for deletion because of the following concern:
It is difficult to determine whether the subject satisfies academic notability or general notability, because this article needs to be blown up and started over, consisting as it does largely of marketing buzzspeak. Almost unreferenced, with no references in the lede and no footnotes until three-fourths of the way through the article. Google search verifies that he exists and has the career described. We knew that, but it doesn't find significant secondary coverage. The first sentence of the lede is syntactically valid and has no semantic meaning. The second sentence of the lede says "Initiatives he spearheaded have radically changed the way people interact with technology." That means that he had a major part in the implementation of the Domain Naming System, which is more relevant to the DNS than to him.
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Please consider improving the page to address the issues raised. Removing {{proposed deletion/dated}} will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. Robert McClenon (talk) 18:01, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
Nomination of David H. Holtzman for deletion[edit]
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article David H. Holtzman is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.
The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/David H. Holtzman until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.
Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:39, 29 July 2020 (UTC)