User talk:WiReD Zephyr
WiReD Zephyr, you are invited to the Teahouse!
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Hi WiReD Zephyr! Thanks for contributing to Wikipedia. We hope to see you there!
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As a new registration, you have expanded this article with what appears to be lot of unreferenced material. Wikipedia works on ths basis of using published reliable sources to support the content - it is not a place to key-in your own thoughts and race commentary (fan stuff - examples are Huddersfield motorcycle business and Danny Webb's performance, being non-relevant in detail). It is important that you should learn and accept this early on, and that the 'tone' should be non-partisan, in a neutral 'voice'. This article and the rider himself are both obscure, so won't attract much attention from other editors. I'll edit-out where necessary. Thank you.--Rocknrollmancer (talk) 20:36, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
I will reference this stuff if it helps. 2A00:23C7:FB00:C901:9C02:BE21:95FD:EC78 (talk) 20:50, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
Also I haven’t made any comment about Danny Webb’s performance, I have only stated what mechanical issue happened to his bike leading to the crash of 5 riders WiReD Zephyr (talk) 20:56, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
- "performance" is just a word - debacle, failure, calamity, mechanical breakdown (?) ...personal evaluation of other riders and race progress should really not be covered in detail. Also use five rather than 5 (for one to nine - I also include ten, as it is short and succinct). Figures from 10 upwards are shown as numbers. I realise you wouldn't know this. Thank you.--Rocknrollmancer (talk) 21:11, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
Thanks for letting me know, I’ve had added a reference to an article with results and a write up on the race. WiReD Zephyr (talk) 21:13, 12 November 2021 (UTC)