I believe I have corrected all of the above issues. Crystal Clear x3 21:28, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
Comments: References look good. You should use the sortname template in the Performing artist(s) column so that artists sort by last name rather than first name. Also, be sure to watch capitalization based on Manual of Style (see my edit to the list for examples). I imagine some of the nominated works need to be linked. At least on my browser, one or two additional images could be displayed along the side. More thorough review to follow. --Another Believer(Talk) 16:38, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for your edits to the article and advice. I have added several more images to the 'recipients' sections and used sortname in the performing artists column. Crystal Clear x3 20:59, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
Comments: I think it looks very good, but there are some things to do...
In 1993, the name of the video is Diva not Drive
I think Madonna's videos are very well representated in wikipedia, I believe that you could find the link to all of them.
In 1998, Steve Purcell is credited as director, along Morissette.
"The several honored categories are presented...". The grammar here doesn't seem to be as good as what is usually in these Grammy Award lists. I looked at the Short Form list for an example, and it started a similar sentence with "Honors in several categories are presented...". I admire the fact that you're looking for additional improvement in this series of lists, but in this case I think a fix was applied to something that wasn't broken.
Check the sorting in the Performing artist(s) column. Huey Lewis and the News doesn't seem to be sorting in the proper alphabetical order.Giants2008 (27 and counting) 01:38, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
I was not sure how to properly correct that (I tried to sort it like : Huey Lewis and the News - Huey Lewis| and the News) so I just removed the sort template and put them in link brackets. Crystal Clear x3 05:04, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
I think it will be helpful if you add below the images for which video they got the award. done
Try archiving the pdf links, they disappear too soon. ..........I do not know how to do that
The Work column is not sorting alphabetically. The Beatles Love – All Together Now is coming in the second position. fixed
En-dash for The Girlie Show - Live Down Under. done
En-dash for Trapped in the Closet Chapters 13-22done
En-dash for "Charles Dutoit & The Montreal Symphony Orchestra - The Planets" done
This is confusing. --> Ella Fitzgerald – American Masters: Ella Fitzgerald – Something to Live For. Isnt the videos name American Masters: Ella Fitzgerald – Something to Live For? So the whole name should be italicized. fixed
Have you checked whether all video names are wikilinked? ........double checking now Crystal Clear x3 21:55, 19 June 2011 (UTC)doneCrystal Clear x3 01:13, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
"In order to quality" should be "In order to qualify".
"Between 1984 and 1985, this accolade was originally known as Best Video Album. It was renamed in 1986, being awarded as Best Music Video, Long Form." This seems a bit clunky and doesn't read well in 2 sentences, try "From 1984 to 1985, the accolade was known as Best Video Album, but in 1986, it was renamed to Best Music Video, Long Form."