"The MTV Video Music Awards has only nominated Ne-Yo once"
"Black Entertainment Television" Spell out in parentheses that this stands for BET.
"and the album was later certified Platinum by the Recording Industry Association of America after"
"The song became "one of the most-played songs on urban radio stations across the U.S."" I don't see where this quote is in the web citation. Dabomb87 (talk) 03:14, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
All done. "As a teenager", to me, seems like he was taking advantage of this stage of adulthood, as if he thought "I'm a teenager so I will go do this" when in fact it's probably more like "I'm going to do this; it just so happens that I'm a teenager." In any case, "While a teenager" is also safer as it doesn't assume anything. Regarding the quote, it's right in the citation. I can't really clarify this further, as I just copy and pasted the quote in my browser's "find" bar and found it on the page instantly. Gary King (talk) 15:22, 30 October 2008 (UTC)