Wikipedia:Peer review/Basketball (ball)/archive1

Basketball (ball)[edit]

I would like to recieve reviews suchs as out of 10 or out of 5, A, B, C, etc. Judge on the grammar and NPOV in my article.—Preceding unsigned comment added by Supershow (talk • contribs) 16:07, July 29, 2006

Hello, Supershow. You don't seem to have corrected the problems I pointed out in response to your request for feedback. Could you please fix them? Once you fix the problems, I believe the article is close to Good Article standards. Once the peer review is completed, you can nominate it for Good Article. All the best! --J.L.W.S. The Special One 05:47, 2 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The lead is too short — it should be 2-5 paragraphs. —Cel es tianpower ^háblame 20:59, 5 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The "Types of Basketballs" section in particular features far too many sections, making it jarring to read. violet/riga (t) 17:13, 7 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 01:33, 9 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]