Wikipedia:Peer review/Frank Joslyn Baum/archive1
Other than finding my sources and citing them (which I will do eventually, and have asked for help on the matter from other Oz fans who will have read much the same material I have), does anyone have any other suggestions for improving this article? --Scottandrewhutchins 17:08, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
- Expand your prose, it's pretty short in particular your lead-in, and a few pictures will help (don't forget to comply with image guidelines though!). - Mailer Diablo 04:11, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.
- This article has no images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under WP:IUP and WP:IT that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.[1]
- See if possible if there is a free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.[2]
- There may be an applicable infobox for this article. For example, see Template:Infobox Biography, Template:Infobox School, or Template:Infobox City. (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like:18 mm.[3] - Per WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.[4]
- Per WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- As per WP:MOS, please do not link words in headings.
- This article needs footnotes, preferably in the cite.php format recommended by WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with WP:CITE or WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>.[5] - The article will need references. See WP:CITE and WP:V for more information.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that the it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 2a. [6]
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, BrianSmithson 12:53, 18 September 2006 (UTC)