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Iazyges[edit]
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I've listed this article for peer review because, as my namesake article I am interested in getting it to GA (and hopefully FA), hopefully the peer review gets the page to a point where I can bring it to GAN, Thanks! Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:19, 1 November 2016 (UTC)
It looks good but I found some issues.
- Expand the lead a bit. Considering how big is the article, at least the first paragraph could use some expansions.
- Avoid small sections like name and merge it with History.
- Same with small paragraphs like "In 50 AD, an Iazyges cavalry detachment fought alongside the Suevian King Vannius, who was a Roman client king of the Quadi.[8]"
- Try to balance a bit the size of the paragraphs like in After the Dacian Wars
- I'm mixed in regards to redlinks unless users are developing article about the,-
Other than I think the article could become a GA. Also, I made my own peer review here. I would appreciate feedback. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 19:03, 13 November 2016 (UTC)