Wikipedia:Peer review/Illyrians/archive1

Illyrians

I've listed this article for peer review because I believe it needs to be checked before going through a potential GA review. Specifically, the article needs to be enhanced both content-wise and source-wise. It is true that many edit-wars have occurred over the identity and history of the Illyrians. However, the article has remained stable for some time. I would appreciate any assistance whatsoever.

Thanks,

Elysonius (talk) 10:48, 31 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Review by Phoenix-wiki (talk · contribs)

The "Greek mythology" and "Ancient texts" sections at the beggining need significant expansion. The "Bronze Age remains", "Irno Age remains", "Classical period", "Roman rule" and "Middle Ages" can be turned into subsections of one large "History" section, and you can get rid of "remains" at the end of the first two sections. Apart from that, it's quite good. You might want more references, with inline citations and and pic or two more couldn't hurt—Phoenix -wiki 20:21, 31 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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