Wikipedia:Peer review/Kotli District/archive1
I just want to know what I can add to this article and how can I can improve the quality. All comments will be appreciated. Thanks in Advance. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Nyangel252 (talk • contribs)
Comments by SpecialWindler
[edit]Here are some comments and y:
- There is no lead. You must have a LEAD
- See WP:LEAD for more information
- The first sentence of the history section, should probably be the first sentence of your lead.
- You need references/sources
- For all I know, the whole lot could be nonsense.
- See WP:REFERENCE and WP:CITE for more information
- You have a gallery of images, there is no need.
- Spread your images around the article, like other articles.
- In the see also section you have a red link, remove it. You can't see also it, can you.
That should be enough to get you going, especially the references. SpecialWindler talk 23:47, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
The article is difficult to follow for someone who does not already know about the region. Material about geography should be removed from the history section. The article on Alsace_Lorraine might be good inspiration for how to reorganize your article. VisitorTalk 23:40, 20 August 2007 (UTC)