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Liliuokalani[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because…Maile66, Mark Miller and I are interested in getting this article to FAC status. Please help us with any outside opinions on further expansion and clean up to get this to FAC status. There is much to be written about Liliuokalani but for a Wikipedia entry we have hit most of the points get it there.

Thanks, KAVEBEAR (talk) 19:31, 11 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments: G'day, just a couple of minor points to get you started: AustralianRupert (talk) 06:15, 22 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Note 10, I think the referencing style is a little inconsistent here. The citation probably needs "ref" tags after Berger

Done.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 19:41, 22 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

some citations use "surname, firstname" (Russ, William Adam) while others use "first name surname" (e.g. "Vernon M. Briggs)

Working on it.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 19:41, 22 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Finish. All footnotes are now currently Harvard reference link to books or newspapers which have been reformatted for consistency. --KAVEBEAR (talk) 23:19, 22 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

in the References, "Fixico, Donald L. (2007)" does not appear to be specifically cited, so it should possibly be moved to the Further reading section

Done.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 19:41, 22 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Good luck with taking the article further.