Wikipedia:Peer review/Mohammad Hamid Ansari/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to promote it to GA. I am facing some difficulties in expanding the article primarily because lack of sufficient information for GA standards. This is because, Mr. Ansari was a diplomat and there is hardly any coverage of him. Also though he became the vice president of India, since it is merely a ceremonial post, not much is to add about. So I need some suggestions to improve this article.
Thanks, RRD (talk) 12:46, 5 January 2018 (UTC)
Comments by CookieMonster755
[edit]I will be making some comments soon. However, on a first note, the lead needs improvement. There are only two paragraphs in the lead. Generally, it should be four and should be a summary of the article. I will mention more specifics when I have time. On another note, consistency in capitalization and grammar should be established. Indian Politician
, the word politician should be lower cased, as well as vice in Vice president
. Thanks. CookieMonster755✉ 20:29, 1 February 2018 (UTC)