I had tried nominating this for GAN a ways back, but it was brought up on WP:VG that it needed some serious copyediting if it wanted to become a GA. I put a lot of work into this one, so I've decided to file a PR to get a fresh pair of eyes on this. I'd say the sourcing is fine, it's the writing that likely needs some improvement. Before delisting it from the GA backlog I did some rewriting, though it might need a bit more. Thanks! Namcokid47 16:34, 24 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
