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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I believe this article has a good start, but needs some work.

Thanks, Son (talk) 01:57, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by using Eddie6705

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  • Firstly i would start by adding the following template for each citation, rather than simply the web address; {{cite news |first= |last= |authorlink= |coauthors= |title= |url= |work= |publisher= |date= |accessdate=28 January 2009 }} (Delete the parameters you don't need).
  • I would try and expand the lead to make it at least two paragraphs long. Summarise the article more in this section.
  • The first half of the article needs more referencing, there is only one before the ratings section.

Per the peer review directions, I am archiving this as it has a cleanup tag at the top of the article. Ruhrfisch ><>°° 04:11, 29 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]