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06:54:34, 3 May 2022 review of submission by PriyadharshiniRajkumar

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Priyadharshini Rajkumar is an notable co artist in indian film industry for past 25 years PriyadharshiniRajkumar (talk) 06:54, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

PriyadharshiniRajkumar You seem to be writing about yourself, while not forbidden, this is highly discouraged, please read the autobiography policy. It is usually difficult for people to write about themselves here, because in order to do so one must set aside everything they know about themselves and only write based on what independent reliable sources say about them. Your draft was rejected, and as such will not be considered further, as it appears that you do not meet the special Wikipedia definition of a notable performer. 331dot (talk) 07:20, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 10:44:24, 3 May 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Tapobhumi

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Hello Respected One, one of our drafts : https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Draft:Mohini_Ghosh we have again made some changes to qualify for wikipedia, hope to hear positive response , thank you - have a nice day


Tapobhumi (talk) 10:44, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

14:59:59, 3 May 2022 review of draft by Gage98

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This page was rejected for reading like an advertisement. I would like help on what part reads like an advertisement. The company overview and history are not an advertisement. The only thing I can think that may read like that is the product overviews. If that is the case, please tell me how to fix this. Possibly a solution is just deleting the product overview section. Gage98 (talk) 14:59, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Gage98 Wikipedia is not a place to tell about the existence of a company and what it considers to be its own history. An article about a company must summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the company, showing how it meets Wikipedia's special definition of a notable company. Press releases, announcements of routine business activities, interviews, and other primary sources do not establish notability. Please read Your First Article.
I gather that you have an association with this company. If so, please read WP:COI and WP:PAID for information on required formal disclosures. 331dot (talk) 15:29, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Gage98 What parts read like an advertisement?
  • Theroadislong already mentioned "wide range of products and services" in the draft
  • "also owned such companies as"
  • "created change for DIT‐MCO"
  • "the company catalog boasted"
Other issues: The entire Products group should be deleted. Wikipedia is not a catalog. Who would keep the Products section up to date, and do you see other encyclopedias with this detailed level of information?
It's not important that "Hannon changed his title from engineer to sales manager" or that "Mr. Korholz exchanged DITMCO and its parent holding company, the Xebec Corporation, to the National General Corporation for a block of Pan American Sulfur stock". Does that show how this company is notable? I am not a reviewer, but I don't think anything in the "Ownership" section belongs in an encyclopedia.
This company might be notable, but I don't think this article shows that quite yet. You can still update and resubmit the draft. Good luck. 73.127.147.187 (talk) 17:53, 7 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 15:37:26, 3 May 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by KPC091992

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KPC091992 (talk) 15:37, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]


KAMPANAT

Sorry but your draft has no content? Theroadislong (talk) 17:43, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

16:03:14, 3 May 2022 review of draft by July Garza III

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July Garza III (talk) 16:03, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

You don't ask a question. 331dot (talk) 17:40, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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