Wikipedia talk:Co-op/Morg4kele

Welcome to the Co-op! We have a mentor for you.

Hello, Morg4kele! Thank you for your interest in the Co-op. You've been matched with Tokyogirl79, who has listed "writing" in their mentorship profile. Your mentor will be contacting you soon to get things started. HostBot (talk) 11:00, 28 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Morg4kele: Hi Morg4kele, I'm Jethro, a mentor and coordinator at the Co-op. Tokyogirl79 doesn't appear to be available at the moment, so I figured I would step in to help you out. We can use this page here to talk to each other, so feel free to place your reply below. It looks like your draft for Awo Omamma was accepted. Congratulations. It's coming together pretty well. You said you were looking to get a little help editing the article. If there's something you want me to look at specifically, let me know, but here are a few suggestions and questions to get started:

The Trade Route section can probably be combined with the Economy section.
In the sentence starting, For example, in those days, the Aro slave merchants would acquire their victims what time period is this referring to?
Citations to references should be placed after punctuation (like periods and commas). That happens sometimes in the article, but it's not always consistent.
Is the town properly called Awo-omamma or Awo Omamma? The title of the article is the latter, but the former is used in the body. If both are used, that is fine, and we can specify this in the beginning of the article.

Let me know if there's anything else I can help you with. Thanks, I, JethroBT ^{drop me a line} 00:04, 30 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for stepping in Jethro! I was off of work this weekend and didn't get back on until tonight. Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡) 04:58, 31 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]