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The band probably meets the notability criteria but the album does not. This is a soon-to-be-released album which has not been reviewed by any major media outlet and does not have significant sales volume to be considered notable. The first single from this album doesn't even crack the top 40,000 at amazon. Merge with main page. Discuss. 24.21.49.247 (talk) 05:17, 30 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Too much info[edit]

I think this article has too much information on the departure of Andrew and Dan Paiano and Kyler Browne. What I think would make the page better is short sentences on why those people left. For example:

"In January 2011, Lead guitarist Kyler Browne left the band due to personal reasons having nothing to do with the band. He was replaced by Daniel Ciccotelli."

"In Mid-July 2011, the Paiano brothers, Andrew (rhythm guitar) and Daniel (Drums) were fired from the band for unclear reasons. (*) Shortly after, Andrew was invited to join American band Woe, Is Me as lead guitarist, to which he accepted to."

I also think the "Christianity Label" section is unnecessary, and this info could be put at the top of the page.

I could do this editing myself, but I decided to post my thoughts on the talk page to see what others think.

(* I didn't really understand why they left.)

Thanks,

Salamibears58 (talk) 20:54, 2 August 2011 (UTC)Salamibears58[reply]

Changed some info. Salamibears58 (talk) 20:09, 16 September 2011 (UTC)Salamibears58[reply]

People like knowing the history of bands in detail, not really sure why you want this stuff gone? Jer ^{Hit me up} 21:00, 16 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Also, in favor of the title for the section, having it "Post-Geeving" is totally unnecessary because one: that's obvious two: most of the text is about the departure of these brothers 3: 60% of people visiting the article are still coming to read about this which leads onto a fourth point: there's no reason to remove all the detail since it is what the people want to see. • GunMetal Angel 21:54, 16 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

But it's unfair to all the other past band members who don't have such an amount of information on their departures. Salamibears58 (talk) 01:34, 24 September 2011 (UTC)Salamibears58[reply]

That's because there isn't as much info on why the other former members have left, if we had it, it would be there. Jer ^{Hit me up} 01:55, 24 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

True, true. Let's leave it. Salamibears58 (talk) 02:00, 24 September 2011 (UTC)Salamibears58[reply]

Genre[edit]

I don't really think we should classify them as Metalcore and Electropop. Can't you just call them Electronicore? (DeanBaetz (talk) 23:44, 1 June 2012 (UTC))[reply]

lolno GunMetal Angel 22:45, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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