Talk:Any Song

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by TheAwesomeHwyh (talk) 13:09, 15 July 2020 (UTC)

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• ... that Zico’s "Any Song" dance-challenge became viral on TikTok after several South Korean celebrities such as Hwasa, Chungha and Lee Hyori, participated in the trend? Source: [1][2][3][4]

• Reviewed: Ego Death (song)

Created by Ashleyyoursmile (talk). Self-nominated at 15:03, 13 June 2020 (UTC).

• Hi, Ashleyyoursmile. You have 3 DYK credits to date and two more of your nominations have been approved and are waiting to be promoted. Please provide a QPQ for this one. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 18:49, 6 July 2020 (UTC)

• Yoninah, QPQ provided! Ashleyyoursmile! 05:40, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

• Thank you. Ready for review. Yoninah (talk) 06:30, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

• This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:48, 12 July 2020 (UTC)

GOCE copyedit request

• It also charted at number one on the Billboard K-pop Hot 100 and number four on the US World Digital Song Sales chart, in addition to reaching top ten peaks in Malaysia and Singapore. I guessed what was meant by "top ten peaks" further below, but to clarify, it's supposed to stand for "top ten songs"? —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 04:40, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

• Yes, "top ten peaks" as in the song entered the top ten in record charts of these countries. --Ashleyyoursmile! 05:54, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

 Done. Reworded to "one of the top ten songs". —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 16:00, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

• On January 7, 2020, KOZ Entertainment posted a concept teaser on its official SNS account to announce the title and release date of the track. What is a "concept teaser" and how is it different from a regular teaser? —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 04:40, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

• It is a regular teaser, well in this case it's a photo teaser. But in general, "concept teaser" is somewhat specific to K-pop; kind of to give an idea of the concept behind the album/single. --Ashleyyoursmile! 05:54, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

 Done. Leaving as is. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 16:00, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

• The challenge involves performing the "easy-to-follow" choreography by Zico to the track. Is the trend still around or is it over? —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 04:40, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

• I don't get to see many news on this challenge these days, so maybe safe to assume that the trend is over?--Ashleyyoursmile! 05:54, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

 Done. The most recent news I could find was in February or March, so I'll tentatively change it into past tense. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 16:00, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

• It achieved an "all-kill" and became the first song of 2020 to do so. What does "all-kill" mean? —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 04:40, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

• Take a look here All-Kill. Hope this helps. --Ashleyyoursmile! 05:54, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

 Done. Wiki-linked to the section. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 16:00, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

• "Any Song" peaked at number four on the US Billboard World Digital Song Sales chart on the week of January 25, 2020, and became Zico's eighth chart entry and fourth top five songs on the chart. Does "fourth top five songs" mean Zico's fourth song to make it to the chart's top five, or does it mean fourth out of the top five songs on the chart? —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 04:40, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

• Apologies for my poor phrasing, but its the former. --Ashleyyoursmile! 05:54, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

 Done. Reworded. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 16:00, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

@Ashleyyoursmile: Looking forward to your responses! —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 04:40, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

• Tenryuu, thank you for taking up this request. I have responded to your queries above. --Ashleyyoursmile! 05:54, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

@Ashleyyoursmile: Okay, I think that's everything here. I'll consider the request to be complete; if you have any concerns let me know! —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 16:00, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 20:38, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

The very day of nomination, I have grabbed this; will start tomorrow though --K. Peake 20:38, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Target hip hop to Hip hop music
• WP:OVERLINK of Zico under songwriters
• "as a single on" → "as the EP's sixth and final single on"

• "sixth and final single is wrong since the EP is supported by just two singles

• Target hip hop to Hip hop music
• "between rap and vocals." → "between rapping and singing."
• "in South Korea: it debuted on the" → "in South Korea; it debuted atop the"
• "which made it become the longest running number one song on" → "becoming the longest running chart topper on"
• "It also charted at number one on the" → "The song further charted at number one on the US"
• "to being charted one of the top ten songs in" → "to charting within the top 10 in" per MOS:NUM
• "The single was the most-successful song in" → "It was the most successful song of"
• "was certified platinum by" → "was certified platinum in the country by"
• Target Korea Music Content Association to Gaon Music Chart
• Add some info about the video
• "He gave his first televised live performance of "Any Song" on" → "Zico first performed "Any Song" on"
• Mention when the performance was
• "promote the track on" → "promote the song on"

 Done everything else

Writing and composition

• Retitle to Background and composition
• "by him and Poptime." → "by him, while additional production was handled by Poptime."
• "He elaborated about the process behind songwriting" → "He elaborated on the process behind the songwriting"
• ""Any Song" is described as a" → "Musically, "Any Song" has been described as a"
• [5][6] should only be at the end of the sentence
• Target hip hop to Hip hop music
• "song[7] featuring a" → "song,[7] featuring a"
• "the song features an" → "the song includes an"
• "being backed by an" → "that is backed by an"
• "and runs for 3:47." → "and has a duration of 3:47."

 Done all

Release and promotion

• Img looks good
• "to announce the single's title and release date." → "that announced the single's title of "Any Song", and its release date."
• "for streaming services and digital download on January 13, 2020, as a single in various countries through" → "for digital download and streaming in various countries as a single by"
• "as an album track on" → "as the sixth track on"
• Remove wikilink on extended play
• "Random Box released on" → "Random Box, released on"
• "numerous Korean celebrities participated" → "numerous South Korean celebrities participated"
• Trim the list of celebs that participated as it reads like a supermarket list currently, though I appreciate the effort at least
• "in Korea before spreading internationally." → "in South Korea, before becoming a trend internationally."
• "The challenge videos received" → "The dance challenge videos received"

 Done all

Awards

• "weekly music programs such as" → "weekly music programs, such as"
• "MBC's Show! Music Core due to" → "MBC's Show! Music Core, due to"
• "awards including "triple crown" (three consecutive wins) on" → "awards, including three consecutive wins that led to receiving the "triple crown" award on"
• The columns below the first in the table should not be centered, apart from refs

 Done all

Commercial performance

• Img looks good
• "was a huge success in South Korea." → "was a commercial success in South Korea."
• "to the top of" → "to the top position of"
• The "including" part should come after "streaming site's real-time charts" and does not need brackets
• "The single remained at the top of all" → "The song remained atop all"
• "for seven consecutive days." → "for a full week."
• "On Korea's largest" → "On South Korea's largest
• "for 8 weeks." → "for eight weeks."
• Add release years of "Good Day" and "Gangnam Style" in brackets and mention at the end of the sentence that it tied them for second most consecutive weeks atop the chart
• "It dropped to number two" → "The song fell down to number two"
• "of February 22." → "of February 22, 2020."
• "On the first week of March," → "In the first week of that year's March,"
• "previously held by" → "which was previously held by"
• Add release year of "Love Scenario" in brackets
• "The single spent" → "The song spent"
• "in the chart's top ten before" → "in the top 10 of the chart." since the rest of the sentence is useless per WP:CHARTTRAJ; however, keep the rest of the increase/decreases since they do not violate this rule
• "also topped the component" → "also topped the Gaon component"
• "and two consecutive weeks respectively." → "and two consecutive weeks, respectively."
• "in January and March" → "in both January and March"
• "in South Korea based on" → "in South Korea, based on"
• "It was eventually" → ""Any Song" was eventually"
• Target Korea Music Content Association to Gaon Music Chart
• "streams exceeding 100,000,000 units." → "streams exceeding 100,000,000 units in the country."
• "debuted on the" → "debuted atop the US"
• "at the top." → "at the top position."
• "was eventually broken by BTS' "On" which earned" → "was later broken by BTS' "On" (2020), which spent"
• "eighth chart entry and fourth song to become one of the top five" → "eighth entry and fourth song to reach the top five"
• "The single remained on" → "The song remained on"
• "and ranked as a top ten song in" → "and reached the top 10 of the charts in"

 Done all

Music video

• "released on January 9 and 10." → "that were released on January 9 and January 10, 2020, respectively."
• "turning up at his house" → "arriving at his house" since this is more encyclopaedic
• "Zico feels dejected as he supposedly planned..." where is this part backed up?
• [57][5] should be put in numerical order
• "The video ends with" → "The music video ends with"

 Done all

Track listing

• "Any song" → "Any Song"

 Done

Credits and personnel

• Good

Charts

Weekly charts

• South Korea (K-pop Hot 100) → K-pop Hot 100 (Billboard)
• Target World Digital Songs to World Digital Song Sales

 Done all

Monthly chart

• Good

Certifications

• Good

Release history

• Label → Label(s)

 Done

See also

• Remove Random Box from here

 Done

References

• Copyvio score looks amazing at 7.4%; props for sure!!!
• Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
• Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 2, 3, 4, 15 and 27
• Add language parameter for JP release on ref 14
• Cite YTN News as publisher instead for ref 20 and target to YTN, plus fix MOS:QWQ issues
• [Naver → Naver on ref 31
• Cite Star TV as publisher instead for ref 33
• Ref 38 is missing a trans title and fix MOS:QWQ issues
• Cite No Cut News as publisher instead for ref 40 and wikilink
• Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 41
• Ref 60 can be removed and replaced with ref 54 since that backs up the info

• ref. 60 supports "K-pop Hot 100" peak position while ref. 54 backs up "US World Digital Songs" position, how are they related?

• Ashleyyoursmile Sorry that was a typo, I meant to put ref 52 not 54. Understand my comment now? --K. Peake 12:57, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

External links

• Good

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold for the first review I took on of one of your articles in over a month, have faith the changes will be fixed in a week or less since it is small! --K. Peake 11:29, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

• Kyle Peake, thank you so much for taking this up so quickly. I have mostly fixed the issues pointed out by you and left two comments above. Also, can you take a look at the "Commercial performance" section once? I have added the line: "The song's commercial success has been attributed to the viral dance-challenge." which I'd initially forgotten. If you think the sentence needs a fix please feel free to suggest. I'm also thinking if this sentence should be added to the lead? --Ashleyyoursmile! 12:53, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

• Ashleyyoursmile Change "the viral dance-challenge" → "its viral dance challenge", plus you also need to make the fix that I explained in references after my previous mistake and then this article will be fine. Also no, I do not believe it needs to be included in the lead even though that looks sick at three paragraphs currently that will look even better on the GAN page soon!!! --K. Peake 12:57, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

• Kyle Peake, and done everything that you asked for. Thank you once again for another amazing review. :) --Ashleyyoursmile! 13:06, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

• Ashleyyoursmile ✓ Pass now, good job on this! --K. Peake 13:41, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.