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"Production"[edit]

This section contains in a single paragraph various tidbits of information, which have (apparently) no connection to each other, and sometimes no connection to the plot in the previous section. The information should at least be split into several paragraphs; for several of these "trivia" tidbits it is not clear (to me) why they should appear in this article. Context would be helpful.

"The apartment in the pilot " -- whose apartment?
"...did not included a bathroom, which was done in case the series was not picked up." -- what? What was "done", and why?
"The bar scene was inspired..." - Which bar scene? No bar is mentioned in the plot.
"... by a real life incident by one of the producers ". Perhaps a native speaker of English can fix that.
"When Kara and Winn went to the top of the building," - that was not mentioned in the plot, either.
"... the producers were expecting clear skies, but it was hampered by smog and hotter temperatures." What was hampered?? Clear skies were hampered by hotter temperatures?

There are many more points. For example, when I read that "The final dialogue scene featuring Kara and James was shortened", I get essentially no information. I would expect that scenes are often shortened in the editing process.

--Austrian (talk) 00:04, 17 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]