Template:Did you know nominations/Health and Morals of Apprentices Act 1802

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 18:49, 16 May 2013 (UTC)

Health and Morals of Apprentices Act 1802[edit]

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... that Sir Robert Peel couldn't be bothered to fix his cotton mills, so he proposed an Act of Parliament to do it for him?

Reviewed: Yeeda Station

Created by Staceydolxx (talk), Worm That Turned (talk). Nominated by Worm That Turned (talk) at 21:45, 8 May 2013 (UTC).

Reviewing now. Writ Keeper ⚇♔ 02:43, 15 May 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, good so far. The hook is excellent and cited directly, the article seems informative at first glance, and the few copyvio spotchecks came up negative. The article is in need of a good, solid copyediting run, though; there are a few runon sentences, missing punctuation (including periods at the end of sentences), citations within punctuation, etc.: mostly little stuff like that. I'll make a copyediting sweep myself, and then y'all should probably give it another look-through (I've tried to keep Americanisms from creeping in, but you never know), and then I think we're good to go. Writ Keeper ⚇♔ 02:53, 15 May 2013 (UTC)
- Finished my initial copyediting pass. Writ Keeper ⚇♔ 03:06, 15 May 2013 (UTC)
  - I've taken another pass too. Worm^TT(talk) 08:27, 15 May 2013 (UTC)
  - Thanks very much for your work for improving the way this article in written. It now looks fantastic to me, thanks =)Staceydolxx (talk) 13:46, 15 May 2013 (UTC)
Excellent, then I think we're good to go here. Writ Keeper ⚇♔ 15:29, 15 May 2013 (UTC)