Template:Did you know nominations/Herbert Greene (Broadway conductor)

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:26, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
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Herbert Greene (Broadway conductor)[edit]

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Created/expanded by Adambrower (talk). Nominated by Ryan Vesey (talk) at 21:39, 28 May 2012 (UTC)

  • I did some cleanup and formatting on citations. However, I wonder where the birth information was obtained. Also, the first paragraph of the Career section is unreferenced and requires verification. More cleanup is desired, to be honest. --George Ho (talk) 06:44, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
  • I see that no citations were added to verify such information. Unlike films and television, live performances are not recorded. Instead, they are reported by third-party and other non-primary sources. If there is no further effort to make this article well-sourced, then this nomination will likely be rejected. --George Ho (talk) 23:49, 18 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Sadly, Adambrower is the only one with access to this information so I am unable to improve the article with sources at this time. Ryan Vesey Review me! 02:27, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
  • I notice that he might have returned from a trip, so we'll expect him to add sources anytime soon. Patience... George Ho (talk) 02:30, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for your patience all. unfortunately the wait will be compounded, since i underwent several hours of oral surgery yesterday and my acuity, already in short supply, is severely diminished. nonetheless i would hate to see this admirable opportunity to get out the word on HG slip away. am i right in assuming that i especially need to support his study with Maestro Lomanaco and the publication of "The White Notes?" the latter may be possible; the former, probably not.Adambrower (talk) 19:54, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Adambrower, can you elaborate the last two sentences for us, please? I could not understand Maestro Lomanaco and The White Notes. --George Ho (talk) 20:12, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
  • This has been open for another nine days, and by now should be removed, IMO. I made more copyedits, and then some more, and there are some problems. I cut a bunch of unencyclopedic language, but the article is not really up to par--it does not, for instance, actually describe his career, and has an unverified paragraph (that's not per DYK rules). Ryan, I appreciate your efforts to get a new article and editor on the front page, but I'm afraid this one is not ready to go yet. Sorry, Drmies (talk) 02:43, 29 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for your assistance and review Drmies. You were correct on the status of some of the language, it took a bit of effort to get the article ready to move from AFC to the mainspace so I did a less than normal review of the article before considering it for DYK. In any case, it's at least a decent article on a very interesting fellow and hopefully, if more sources are found in the future, we can get a high quality article there. Ryan Vesey Review me! 03:22, 29 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Per reviewer, the article does not meet DYK sourcing rules. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:51, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
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