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##In most modern-day cases this will mean the country of which the person is a [[citizen]] or national, or was a citizen when the person became notable. |
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##''[[Ethnic group|Ethnicity]]'' or [[Sexual orientation|sexuality]] should not generally be emphasized in the opening unless it is relevant to the subject's notability. Similarly, previous [[nationalities]] and/or the country of birth should not be mentioned in the opening sentence unless they are relevant to the subject's notability. |
##''[[Ethnic group|Ethnicity]]'' or [[Sexual orientation|sexuality]] should not generally be emphasized in the opening unless it is relevant to the subject's notability. Similarly, previous [[nationalities]] and/or the country of birth should not be mentioned in the opening sentence unless they are relevant to the subject's notability. |
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*'''Francesco Petrarca''' or '''Petrarch''' (1304–1374) was an [[Italy|Italian]] scholar, [[poet]], and [[Humanism|humanist]], who is credited with having given the [[Renaissance]] its name and inventing the concept of the [[Dark Ages]] ... |
*'''Francesco Petrarca''' or '''Petrarch''' (1304–1374) was an [[Italy|Italian]] scholar, [[poet]], and [[Humanism|humanist]], who is credited with having given the [[Renaissance]] its name and inventing the concept of the [[Dark Ages]] ... |
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*'''César Estrada Chávez''' (March 31, 1927 – April 23, 1993) was a Mexican American farm worker, labor leader, and civil rights activist who, with [[Dolores Huerta]], co-founded the [[National Farm Workers Association]], which later became the [[United Farm Workers]] (UFW) ... |
*'''César Estrada Chávez''' (March 31, 1927 – April 23, 1993) was a Mexican American farm worker, labor leader, and civil rights activist who, with [[Dolores Huerta]], co-founded the [[National Farm Workers Association]], which later became the [[United Farm Workers]] (UFW) ... |
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Generally the guidelines for [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (lead section)|lead sections]] specify what should be in the first section. For example, exact birth and death dates are certainly important to the person being described, but if they are also mentioned in the body and in infobox, the vital year range can be sufficient to provide context in some cases. Birth and death places should be mentioned in the body if known, and in the lead if they are relevant to the person's notability. |
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Revision as of 18:14, 16 June 2010
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The objective of this Manual of Style (or style guide) is to provide guidelines for maintaining visual and textual consistency in biographical articles as well as biographical information in other articles. Maintaining consistency allows Wikipedia to be used more easily.
See also: Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography and Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons.
Opening paragraph
The opening paragraph should have:
- Name(s) and title(s), if any (see, for instance, also Wikipedia:Naming conventions (royalty and nobility));
- Dates of birth and death, if known (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Dates of birth and death);
- Context (location, nationality, or ethnicity);
- In most modern-day cases this will mean the country of which the person is a citizen or national, or was a citizen when the person became notable.
- Ethnicity or sexuality should not generally be emphasized in the opening unless it is relevant to the subject's notability. Similarly, previous nationalities and/or the country of birth should not be mentioned in the opening sentence unless they are relevant to the subject's notability.
- What the person did;
- Why the person is significant.
For example:
- Cleopatra VII Philopator (December 70 BC/January 69 BC – c. August 12, 30 BC) was a queen of ancient Egypt. She was the last member of the Macedonian Ptolemaic dynasty to rule Egypt ...
- Francesco Petrarca or Petrarch (1304–1374) was an Italian scholar, poet, and humanist, who is credited with having given the Renaissance its name and inventing the concept of the Dark Ages ...
- César Estrada Chávez (March 31, 1927 – April 23, 1993) was a Mexican American farm worker, labor leader, and civil rights activist who, with Dolores Huerta, co-founded the National Farm Workers Association, which later became the United Farm Workers (UFW) ...
Generally the guidelines for lead sections specify what should be in the first section. For example, exact birth and death dates are certainly important to the person being described, but if they are also mentioned in the body and in infobox, the vital year range can be sufficient to provide context in some cases. Birth and death places should be mentioned in the body if known, and in the lead if they are relevant to the person's notability.
Names
While the article title should generally be the name by which the subject is most commonly known, the subject's full name should be given in the lead paragraph, if known. Many cultures have a tradition of not using the full name of a person in everyday reference, but the article should start with the complete version. For example:
- (from Fidel Castro): Fidel Alejandro Castro Ruz (born August 13, 1926) ...
- (from François Mitterrand): François Maurice Adrien Marie Mitterrand (October 26, 1916 – January 8, 1996) ...
- (from Brian Jones): Lewis Brian Hopkin Jones (28 February 1942 – 3 July 1969) ...
In some cases, subjects have legally changed their names at some point after birth. In these cases the birth name should be given as well:
- (from Bill Clinton): William Jefferson Clinton (born William Jefferson Blythe III on August 19, 1946) ...
Maiden names
It is common to give the maiden or birth family name (last name, surname) of a woman better known under her married name, for example:
- Lucy Washington (née Payne, 1772?–1846), widow of Major George Steptoe Washington, became the wife of Thomas Todd. She was the first woman married in the White House, in 1812.
An alternate form, Lucy (Payne) Washington, is also widely accepted.
A woman, like all other biographical entrants, should be referred to by her most common name, and that would not necessarily involve using her husband's surname.
Child named for parent or predecessor
Do not place a comma before Jr., Sr., or Roman numeral designation unless it is the preference of the subject or the subject's biographers. Examples: Sammy Davis Jr., George Welton III.
Pseudonyms, stage names and common names
For people who are best known by a pseudonym, the legal name should usually appear first in the article, followed closely by the pseudonym. Follow this practice even if the article itself is titled with the pseudonym:
- Louis Bert Lindley Jr. (June 29, 1919 – December 8, 1983), better known by the stage name Slim Pickens ...
Alternatively, the legal name can appear in apposition to the pseudonym:
- Boris Karloff (November 23, 1887 – February 2, 1969), born William Henry Pratt, was an actor best known for his roles in horror films. He was initially billed as "Karloff" and sometimes as "Karloff the Uncanny".
It is not always necessary to spell out why the article title and lead paragraph give a different name. Care must be taken to avoid implying that a person who does not generally use all their forenames or who uses a familiar form has actually changed their name. Therefore, a lead that reads "Johnny Reid "John" Edwards (born June 10, 1953) ..." is preferable to one that states John Edwards was born with the name Johnny Reid Edwards.
Once the most common name has been determined, remember to add the full personal names and alternative names as redirects. For example, "William Jefferson Clinton" would be added as a redirect to "Bill Clinton". This will prevent others from moving the article later, to what they may believe is the proper name for the article. This also lets future editors know that the chosen shortened name was not an oversight, but was thoughtfully planned.
Honorific prefixes
The inclusion of some honorific prefixes and styles is sometimes controversial on Wikipedia. Wikipedia distinguishes between four groups: nobles, government officials, and members of royal families and clergy, and other individuals. See Wikipedia:Naming conventions (royalty and nobility) for use in article titles.
- Styles and honorifics derived from noble title, including The Most Noble, The Most Honourable, The Right Honourable, and The Honourable, should not be included in the text inline but may be discussed in the article proper.
- Styles and honorifics derived from political activities, including but not limited to The Right Honourable for being a Member of the Privy Council, should not be included in the text inline but may be discussed in the article proper.
- Styles and honorifics related to clergy and royalty, including but not limited to His Holiness and Her Majesty, should not be included in the text inline but may be discussed in the article proper. Clergy should be named as described in Wikipedia:Naming conventions (clergy).
- Where an honorific is so commonly attached to a name that the name is rarely found without it, it should be included. The honorific should be included for "Father Coughlin" (Charles Coughlin), the 1930s priest and broadcaster; Father Damien, the missionary in Hawaii; Father Divine, an American religious leader; Father Joseph, in 17th-century France; and Mother Teresa, a 20th-century humanitarian.
- The prenominals Sir, Dame, Lord and Lady are honorific titles discussed in the Honorific Titles section below. Honorary knights and dames are not entitled to "Sir" or "Dame", only the post-nominal letters.
- In Burmese names, honorifics may be preserved if they are part of the normal form of address, even for ordinary individuals.
An example of "discussion in the article proper" would be listing the official, spoken, and posthumous styles for a pope within an infobox. (See for example, Pope John Paul II). Another example would be creating a section within an article on a member of a royal family discussing his or her various titles, styles, and honours. (See for example, Prince Charles#Titles, styles, honours and arms.)
Royal surnames
Most royal families do not have surnames. Many that do have different personal surnames from the name of their Royal House. For example, different members of the Royal House of Windsor have a range of surnames: Windsor, Mountbatten-Windsor, etc. Charles, Prince of Wales, for example, is not Charles Windsor but Charles Mountbatten-Windsor, as are his siblings and all their children. But many of his cousins are Windsor or other names. Similarly, the House of Habsburg is different to the surnames of some members of the Habsburg/Habsburg-Lorraine family.
Incorporate surnames if they are known in the opening line of an article, e.g., Charles Philip Arthur George Mountbatten-Windsor. But do not automatically presume that a name of a Royal Family is the personal surname of its members. In many cases it is not. For visual clarity, an article should begin with the form "{royal title} {name} {ordinal if appropriate} (full name (+ surname if known, but not for monarchs)" with the full name unformatted and the rest in bold (3 's). In practice, this means for example an article on Britain's Queen Elizabeth should begin "Elizabeth II (Elizabeth Alexandra Mary)". Using this format displays the most important information clearly without an unattractive excess of formatting. Other information on royal titles should be listed where appropriate in chronological order.
Academic titles
Academic and professional titles (such as "Doctor" or "Professor") should not be used before the name in the initial sentence or in other uses of the person's name. Verifiable facts about how the person attained such titles should be included in the article text instead. In cases where the person is widely known by a pseudonym or stage name containing such a title (whether earned or not), it may be included as described above. Post-nominal letters indicating academic degrees (including honorary degrees) should not be included following the subject's name in the first line (although they may occasionally be used in articles of which the person with the degree is not the subject to clarify their qualifications).
For example:
- Isaac Asimov (January 2?, 1920? – April 6, 1992, Template:PronEng, originally Исаак Озимов but now transcribed into Russian as Айзек Азимов) was an American author and professor of biochemistry, ... he went on to Columbia University, from which he graduated in 1939, later returning to earn a PhD in biochemistry in 1948 ...
- Stephen William Hawking, CH, CBE, FRS (born January 8, 1942) is considered one of the world's leading theoretical physicists. Hawking is the Lucasian Professor of Mathematics at the University of Cambridge ...
- David Drew Pinsky (born September 4, 1958), nicknamed "Dr. Drew", is a board-certified physician and addiction medicine specialist. ... Pinsky ... earned his MD at the University of Southern California School of Medicine in 1984 ...
Post-nominal initials
Post-nominal letters, other than those denoting academic degrees, should be included when they are issued by a country or widely recognizable organization with which the subject has been closely associated. Honors issued by other entities may be mentioned in the article, but generally should be omitted from the lead.
Writers should remember that the meaning of the most obvious (to them) post-nominal initials will not be obvious to some readers. When post-nominal initials are used the meaning should be readily available to the reader. This is most easily done with a piped link to an article with the appropriate title thus:
- Joe Bloggs, [[Victoria Cross|VC]] gives Joe Bloggs, VC
ensuring that readers who hover over the initials see the expanded abbreviation as a hint and in the status bar at the bottom of the window. Readers who click immediately on the link, missing hints will hopefully see a short article with the definition clear and near the start. Often one line article will suffice, with appropriate links to further information, thus: Jack Brabham, OBE. (see above in regard to academic titles and post-nominal initials)
Honorific titles
Wikipedia guidelines permit inline use of titles and discourage inline use of honorifics. Honorific titles (e.g. "Sir"/"Dame" prenominals used by some knights), not to be confused with honorary titles, possess properties of honorifics and titles. Their use inline has been controversial. This guideline permits inline use of honorific titles that in general have significant sourced usage or recognition (e.g. in general media) outside of the country or system in which they were given. To be clear, this paragraph is the guideline for permitting a particular class of honorific titles and not a particular instance for a given person. For further guidance, refer to the guideline for criteria for use inline of regular titles. Consensus has determined that the honorific titles 'Sir'/'Dame' and 'Lord'/'Lady' from the British honours system have met the above criteria. Consensus has not yet rejected any honorific titles; if/when they do so, they will be listed here. Open a discussion on the MoS Bio talk page if there is an honorific title that needs consensus.
The use of honorific titles inline is intended to describe the person as holding a particular title, and not prescribe a style or method of addressing or referring to the person or other holders of such titles (thus using it as an honorific). As with other titles, the honorific title should be included in the initial reference and infobox heading for the person, but is optional in later mentions. Other than the initial reference and infobox picture, editors should not add honorific titles to instances of a person's name where it is absent.
Where the normal usage in the nation where the title is valid is to include the title in each mention for the person at issue, then that usage should also be used in Wikipedia. Where the normal usage in such a country is to use the title only in the first mention of a person, that also should be followed in Wikipedia. In all cases, the infobox is the canonical location for all titles and honors. Honorific titles before a given name only (without the surname) are to be avoided.
Subsequent uses of names
After the initial mention of any name, the person should be referred to by surname only, without an honorific prefix such as "Mr", "Mrs", "Miss", or "Ms". For example:
- Fred Smith was a cubist painter in the 15th century. He moved to Genoa, where he met John Doe. Smith later commented: "D'oh!"
However, where a person does not have a surname but a patronymic (like some Russians and most Icelanders) then the proper form of reference is usually the given name. For example:
- The Icelandic prime minister, Jóhanna Sigurðardóttir, should not be referred to as Sigurðardóttir but as Jóhanna; "Jóhanna was elected to the Althing in 1978.":
The person may be referred to by given name in the case of royalty, or as "Prince John", "Princess Jane", "The Duke," "The Earl," "The Duchess," "The Countess," etc. For other subjects, it is preferable to refer to the person by surname, not given name, even if the subject is not controversial. The use of the given name gives the impression that the writer knows the subject personally, which, even if true, is not relevant.
A member of the nobility may be referred to by title if that form of address would have been the customary way to refer to him or her; for example Robert Dudley, 1st Earl of Leicester may become "the Earl of Leicester" or just "Leicester" in subsequent mentions. Be careful not to give someone a title too soon; for example, one should use "Robert Dudley" or "Dudley" when describing events prior to his elevation to the peerage in 1564.
People who are best known by a pseudonym shall be subsequently referred to by their pseudonymous surnames, unless they do not include a recognizable surname in the pseudonym (i.e. Madonna, Snoop Dogg, The Edge), in which case the whole pseudonym is to be used. For people well-known by one-word names, nicknames or pseudonyms, but who often also use their legal names professionally (i.e. musician/actors Beyoncé Knowles, André Benjamin, Jennifer Lopez; doctor/broadcaster Dr. Drew Pinsky), use the legal surname.
For people with academic or professional titles, subsequent uses of names should omit them, with surnames used only. For example, use "Asimov", "Hawking", and "Westheimer"; not "Dr. Asimov", "Professor Hawking" or "Dr. Ruth".
Family members with the same surname
To disambiguate between family members with the same surname, use given names or complete names to refer to relatives upon first mention. For subsequent uses, refer to relatives by given name for clarity and brevity. When referring to the person who is the subject of the article, use just the surname unless the reference is part of a list of family members or if use of the surname alone will be confusing.
For example, in the text of an article on Ronald Reagan:
Incorrect: Ronald and Nancy Reagan arrived separately, Ronald Reagan by helicopter and Nancy Reagan by car. Correct: Ronald and Nancy Reagan arrived separately, Reagan by helicopter and Nancy by car. Correct: The Reagans arrived separately, Ronald by helicopter and Nancy by car.
In the text of an article about the Brothers Grimm:
Incorrect: Jacob Grimm was thirteen months older than his brother, Wilhelm Grimm. Correct: Jacob Grimm was thirteen months older than his brother, Wilhelm.
Tense
Biographies of living persons should generally be written in the present tense, and biographies of deceased persons in the past tense. When making the change upon the death of a subject, the entire article should be reviewed for consistency. If a person is living but has retired, use the present tense "is a former" rather than the past tense "was", e.g.
- John B. Smith (1946–2003) was a baseball pitcher ...
- John A. Smith (born 1946) is a former baseball pitcher ...
Historical events should be written in the past tense in all biographies:
- Smith played for the Baltimore Orioles between 1968 and 1972 ...
Out-of-date material
Be careful not to include information that may become inaccurate in time, especially for articles about living people. Always give a date for any time-sensitive information that you include. For example, when giving a living person's age, state the year the age has been calculated for. When writing about an event on a particular date, the person's age on that date can be mentioned. But do not use phrases like "currently", "this year", "most recently", or "latest", as these phrases date quickly. Instead, use the phrase "As of 2024" or "in 2024". See Wikipedia:Avoid statements that will date quickly.
(Whether dynamic age information can be used, with a template like Template:age (backlinks edit), is still under discussion.)
In particular, there is no need to add "deceased" to any person's article, or those in which they are mentioned. If they have their own article, this should already be sourced. Otherwise, it is unnecessary. To describe people thus is pointless.