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Keith Moon

I'm afraid your edits to this article were again problematic.

You should only wikilink to a subject once, on first mention. Subsequent uses of a proper name should refer to them by last name only. See WP:LASTNAME.
You must take care not to synthesize information to generate original research. You claimed that Moon was invited to join the Jeff Beck Group, which is not cited in either Marsh or Fletcher, two of the best book sources used to create this article.
You have again not cited Moon's presence on other Entwistle's solo albums. When you edit a page on Wikipedia, the text clearly reads "Encyclopedia content must be verifiable." ie: attributed to a reliable source. Any editor may challenge unverifiable information and remove it. Ask yourself this question - if it's that well known, how come nobody else picked up on it?

I'm sorry to come down harsh on this, but good articles need to remain at a particular editorial standard, so editors modifying them should do so with care. Ritchie333 ^(talk) ^(cont) 08:17, 31 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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+== [[Keith Moon]] ==
+I'm afraid your edits to this article were again problematic.
+* You should only wikilink to a subject once, on first mention. Subsequent uses of a proper name should refer to them by last name only. See [[WP:LASTNAME]].
+* You must take care not to [[WP:SYN|synthesize]] information to generate [[WP:OR|original research]]. You claimed that Moon was invited to join the [[Jeff Beck Group]], which is not cited in either Marsh or Fletcher, two of the best book sources used to create this article.
+* You have again not cited Moon's presence on other Entwistle's solo albums. When you edit a page on Wikipedia, the text clearly reads "Encyclopedia content must be [[WP:V|verifiable]]." ie: attributed to a [[WP:RS|reliable source]]. Any editor may challenge unverifiable information and remove it. Ask yourself this question - if it's ''that'' well known, how come nobody else picked up on it?
+I'm sorry to come down harsh on this, but [[WP:GA|good articles]] need to remain at a particular editorial standard, so editors modifying them should do so with care. [[User:Ritchie333|<font color="#7F007F">'''Ritchie333'''</font>]] [[User talk:Ritchie333|<font color="#7F007F"><sup>(talk)</sup></font>]] [[Special:Contributions/Ritchie333|<font color="#7F007F"><sup>(cont)</sup></font>]]  08:17, 31 July 2013 (UTC)