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:::::* The linked source for that statement in the article is [http://books.google.de/books?id=7j6wzn4Aoz8C&lpg=PA258&dq=Betty+Bone+Schiess&pg=PA158&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q=Betty%20Bone%20Schiess&f=false this Google Books page]. Seems OK to me. --[[User:Slashme|Slashme]] ([[User talk:Slashme|talk]]) 07:26, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
:::::* The linked source for that statement in the article is [http://books.google.de/books?id=7j6wzn4Aoz8C&lpg=PA258&dq=Betty+Bone+Schiess&pg=PA158&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q=Betty%20Bone%20Schiess&f=false this Google Books page]. Seems OK to me. --[[User:Slashme|Slashme]] ([[User talk:Slashme|talk]]) 07:26, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
:::::*[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] for '''ALT1''' I've taken the liberty of adding a reference which clearly states the information for ALT1. It also mentions the date of the ordination, July 29, 1974. {{cite web|title=Finding Aid for Ann Robb Smith Papers, 1971 - 2004 |url=http://library.columbia.edu/content/dam/libraryweb/locations/burke/fa/awts/ldpd_5635403.pdf|publisher=Columbia University Libraries|accessdate=09 May 2014}}
:::::* One could potentially create a hook about her leadership in filing suit with the EEOC: I've ensured that there's a good cited source for that if anyone wants to use it. {{cite web|last=Schneiderman|first=Eric|title=Resolution J591-2009: Paying tribute to the life and accomplishments of Constance Cook, former New York State Assemblywoman|url=http://open.nysenate.gov/legislation/bill/J591-2009|publisher=New York State Senate|accessdate=9 May 2014}} [[User:Mary Mark Ockerbloom|Mary Mark Ockerbloom]] ([[User talk:Mary Mark Ockerbloom|talk]]) 15:56, 9 May 2014 (UTC)
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Betty Bone Schiess

5x expanded by Gobonobo (talk), Slashme (talk). Nominated by Gobonobo (talk) at 01:32, 6 May 2014 (UTC).

  • Nice expansion, QPQ done. Hook is a bit confusing, was she one of the leaders to allow ordination of women or she herself was ordinated by some one? Vensatry (ping) 06:52, 6 May 2014 (UTC)
She was both one of the first women in the church to be ordained and a leader in the movement to allow ordination for women. I've added an alt below that might be clearer. gobonobo + c 10:41, 6 May 2014 (UTC)
  • I support the alt-hook: more understandable than the original, even though it loses the aspect of leadership, which is a bit unfortunate. --Slashme (talk) 15:00, 6 May 2014 (UTC)
  • for ALT1. I cannot read the book. Vensatry (ping) 05:58, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
  • The linked source for that statement in the article is this Google Books page. Seems OK to me. --Slashme (talk) 07:26, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
  • for ALT1 I've taken the liberty of adding a reference which clearly states the information for ALT1. It also mentions the date of the ordination, July 29, 1974. "Finding Aid for Ann Robb Smith Papers, 1971 - 2004" (PDF). Columbia University Libraries. Retrieved 09 May 2014. {{cite web}}: Check date values in: |accessdate= (help)
  • One could potentially create a hook about her leadership in filing suit with the EEOC: I've ensured that there's a good cited source for that if anyone wants to use it. Schneiderman, Eric. "Resolution J591-2009: Paying tribute to the life and accomplishments of Constance Cook, former New York State Assemblywoman". New York State Senate. Retrieved 9 May 2014. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 15:56, 9 May 2014 (UTC)