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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 21:02, 9 May 2014 (UTC)

Betty Bone Schiess

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5x expanded by Gobonobo (talk), Slashme (talk). Nominated by Gobonobo (talk) at 01:32, 6 May 2014 (UTC).

  • Nice expansion, QPQ done. Hook is a bit confusing, was she one of the leaders to allow ordination of women or she herself was ordinated by some one? Vensatry (ping) 06:52, 6 May 2014 (UTC)
She was both one of the first women in the church to be ordained and a leader in the movement to allow ordination for women. I've added an alt below that might be clearer. gobonobo + c 10:41, 6 May 2014 (UTC)
  • I support the alt-hook: more understandable than the original, even though it loses the aspect of leadership, which is a bit unfortunate. --Slashme (talk) 15:00, 6 May 2014 (UTC)
  • for ALT1. I cannot read the book. Vensatry (ping) 05:58, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
  • for ALT1: The existing refs didn't support the hook fact very well: I've added a reference which clearly states the information used in ALT1. It also mentions the date of the ordination, July 29, 1974. "Finding Aid for Ann Robb Smith Papers, 1971 - 2004" (PDF). Columbia University Libraries. Retrieved 9 May 2014.
  • One could potentially create a hook about her leadership in filing suit with the EEOC: I've ensured that there's a good cited source for that if anyone wants to use it. Schneiderman, Eric. "Resolution J591-2009: Paying tribute to the life and accomplishments of Constance Cook, former New York State Assemblywoman". New York State Senate. Retrieved 9 May 2014. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 15:56, 9 May 2014 (UTC)