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Your submission at Articles for creation: Pauline Johnson (April 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Sulfurboy (talk) 03:49, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Abhibedi999! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Sulfurboy (talk) 03:49, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pauline Johnson (April 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Pauline Johnson and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Pauline Johnson, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Sulfurboy (talk) 06:00, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pauline Johnson (April 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Johnson is probably notable , but this is a a promotional press release, not an encyclopedia article. Remove the information about her hobbies. don't keep calling her "Dr." postdoc awards are trivial . Don't ise full capitals for authors names. AND the way to show notability is to indicate the citations for his 4 or 5 most cited articles, using data from google Scholar or Scopus or ISI. If you're going to be paid for writing articles, learn how to do it right.

. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Pauline Johnson and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Pauline Johnson, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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DGG ( talk ) 07:23, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Notice

There is currently a discussion at Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents regarding an issue with which you may have been involved. The thread is Draft:Pauline Johnson. Robert McClenon (talk) 16:25, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Pauline Johnson has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Pauline Johnson. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 16:31, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pauline Johnson (April 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

I am declining this draft because it has not been reworked as requested by User:DGG, as is evidenced by the subject still being referred to as Dr. Johnson. We know that she has a Ph.D., but we do not put Dr. in front of the names of physicians or scientists; we state what their education is.

Johnson almost certainly satisfies academic notability. It appears that a draft by this paid editor is never going to satisfy the second pillar of Wikipedia. I am not rejecting this draft, because a neutral editor should be able to clean it up. I am not requesting that this draft be deleted, because a neutral editor should be able to clean it up. I am not that neutral editor, because I am involved and annoyed.

I have requested a topic-ban against this paid editor continuing to submit this draft, which is wasting the time of the reviewers.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Pauline Johnson and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Pauline Johnson, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Robert McClenon (talk) 16:37, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at [[Draft:Pauline Johnson]]. Thanks! [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 16:31, 16 April 2020 (UTC) </div>
+== Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Pauline Johnson|Pauline Johnson]] (April 16) ==
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+{{divbox|blue|3=I am declining this draft because it has not been reworked as requested by [[User:DGG]], as is evidenced by the subject still being referred to as Dr. Johnson.  We know that she has a Ph.D., but we do not put Dr. in front of the names of physicians or scientists; we state what their education is.
+Johnson almost certainly satisfies [[WP:NACADEMIC|academic notability]].  It appears that a draft by this paid editor is never going to satisfy [[WP:5P2|the second pillar of Wikipedia]].  I am not rejecting this draft, because a neutral editor should be able to clean it up.  I am not requesting that this draft be [[WP:MFD|deleted]], because a neutral editor should be able to clean it up.  I am not that neutral editor, because I am [[WP:INVOLVED|involved]] and annoyed.
+I have requested a [[WP:TBAN|topic-ban]] against this paid editor continuing to submit this draft, which is wasting the time of the reviewers.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer.  You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit ''when they have been resolved''.
+{{clear}}
+* If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to [[Draft:Pauline Johnson]] and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
+* If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to [[Draft:Pauline Johnson]], click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{tl|Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
+* If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and [[Wikipedia:Criteria for speedy deletion#G13. Abandoned Drafts and Articles for creation submissions|may be deleted]].
+* If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the <span class="plainlinks">[//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Pauline_Johnson '''Articles for creation help desk''']</span>, on the <span class="plainlinks">[//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Robert_McClenon&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Pauline_Johnson '''reviewer's talk page''']</span> or use [[Wikipedia:IRC help disclaimer|Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors]].
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