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*'''Delist''' Per nom. - [[User Talk:GamerPro64|<span style="color:red">GamerPro64</span>]] 02:00, 2 August 2020 (UTC)
*'''Delist''' Per nom. - [[User Talk:GamerPro64|<span style="color:red">GamerPro64</span>]] 02:00, 2 August 2020 (UTC)
* '''Delist''' So much uncited text here. This isn't even GA-level. Easy call. [[User:Hog Farm|Hog Farm]] <sub> [[User talk:Hog Farm|Bacon]]</sub> 01:39, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
* '''Delist''' So much uncited text here. This isn't even GA-level. Easy call. [[User:Hog Farm|Hog Farm]] <sub> [[User talk:Hog Farm|Bacon]]</sub> 01:39, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
{{FARClosed|delisted}} [[User:Nikkimaria|Nikkimaria]] ([[User talk:Nikkimaria|talk]]) 18:31, 8 August 2020 (UTC)

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Aikido (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

Notified: PRehse, article talk 2020-03-14, WP Martial arts, WP Japan

Review section

This is a 2007 promotion that is in need of a tuneup. There is considerable uncited text and un underdeveloped lead. In terms of MOS, there is incorrect use of bolding throughout, WP:BADITALICS (of foreign language proper nouns), and MOS:SANDWICH. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 18:05, 5 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

FARC section

Issues raised in the review section include sourcing and style. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:46, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]